A Conversation for Young and Hasty Marriages

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Post 1

benjaminpmoore

This is an interesting entry and I think it will read even better if it is fleshed out by one or two concrete facts. For example- what are your definitions of 'young' and 'hasty'? You have said that many failed marriages are 'probably' young and hasty- is their any statistical evidence to back up this claim? It is a very thoughtful piece all round and expanding it with a few facts will, I would think, take it much closer to being a valuable guide entry.


Wrong location :-)

Post 2

Leo

I agree with you that a few concrete examples etc could flesh this piece out, so let me point you to the Review thread where this will show up:

On the upper right side of the page is a little linke that says:
currently in WRITING WORKSHOP, or something like that.
click on the writing workshop part. It will bring you to the review thread, where you can repost, and cafzal will see your comment.

smiley - ok


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