A Conversation for a couple of hamsters and me

Alternative Writing Workshop: A1025047 - almost true

Post 1

pedboy

Entry: almost true - A1025047
Author: pedboy-(DOS)minister of smelly Veeblefetzers and expert on all things shallow, (camels) A965810 - U200417

smiley - cheers

smiley - zen
smiley - towel

pedboy U200417


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Post 2

SomeMuppet

Pedboy


smiley - laughsmiley - laughsmiley - laughsmiley - laughsmiley - laughsmiley - laughsmiley - laughsmiley - laughsmiley - laughsmiley - laughsmiley - laughsmiley - laugh

One wonders which parts are true

(I'll do some proper feedback when I can see through the tears)
smiley - laughsmiley - laughsmiley - laugh


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Post 3

sprout

Fantastic! Very funny.

Sprout


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Post 4

Mort - a middle aged Girl Interrupted

Made me laugh!! Haven't quite experienced that before but have had enough hamsters with tumours presented at the surgery that actually turned out to be testicles smiley - laugh

Great reading!


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Post 5

LL Waz

awww smiley - laugh

smiley - ta for posting that smiley - biggrin


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Post 6

pedboy

I know this is gonna sound silly, but I was as I was going through this I wondered if the hamster may be homo-phobic, or it might not matter... smiley - ta

smiley - zen
smiley - towel

U200417


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Post 7

friendlywithteeth

smiley - laughed until I actually smiley - wah!

[Though I'll blame hayfever smiley - winkeye]


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Post 8

pedboy

It's alright friendlywithteeth , I laffed so hard myself. smiley - ta

smiley - zen
smiley - towel

pedboy


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Post 9

friendlywithteeth

smiley - smiley


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Post 10

Spiff


Hi Pedboy, smiley - ok and hi to 'the usual suspects', smiley - winkeye

This is terrific! smiley - cheers Much smiley - laugh, thanks. smiley - biggrin

You really have pictures? smiley - winkeye Don't let them get on the web; they'll probly end up on one of them 'left-handed' sites! smiley - yikes

Great little tale, well told. Love the dialogue and the narrative asides!

cyaround
spiff


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Post 11

Spiff


*sigh*

i've just done this twice in a row - posted and thought of a PS while the post was going through! smiley - grr

So...

PS One suggestion - I think a snappier title could do a world of good to this piece.

We don't care how much of it is absolutely gospel; but the potential for a cracking comic title is definitely there.

Up to you, of course.
spiff


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Post 12

Fattylizard - everybody loves an eggbee

What a mad experience.

A truly joyous discovery, thank you so much for doing it, and then writing about it.

I want to bump it up, so all can see.

And hilarity ensued.

Fattysmiley - dragon


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Post 13

Spiff


I can't help feeling that a title-change would reap rewards in terms of attracting readers to this gem.

In the meantime, it's off to the top of the list.

You there, Pedboy?


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Post 14

Spynxxx

I'm without words, I'm without breath, my cheeks are damp and if the laughter dosn't subside I fear I may wet myself!smiley - laughsmiley - roflsmiley - laughsmiley - rofl

Spynxxxsmiley - fullmoon


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Post 15

pedboy

I agree, but lost...


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