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Entry: Stargate SG-1 - The TV Series (Update) - A9624017
Author: Reefgirl (Knit Happens, Deal With It) - U190551

I'm not sure how it's done submittingwise but here's the Original A765597

to read tomorrow sorry can't give it my full attention tonightoff to bed

Cheers Annie

I'm about a quarter down, just letting you know I haven't forgotten but I can't give it my full attention right at this moment. (Pancake-mess-clean-up time)

Shall post again when I've read it all

Cheers Annie

I take it now is not a good time to mention that pancakes can be made in the morning and reheated in the microwave

It's not a show I'm really familiar with to be honest, so I can't comment in that much depth.

Just a couple of general comments then. In one of your bolded headers, you have an erroneous apostrophe - 'One's'.

I'd suggest moving the 'More Trivia' up a block so that it comes at the end of the characters section under its own Header. Then the 'Further Information' can deal just with other websites and fan activity.

Hopefully this will bump the entry up the listing a bit now.

It's written for the layman not the fan, when you have time could you read it again and tell me if, as a non-fan, if it makes sense

Cheer's for the comment's

* off to rectify*

Done and Done Jims

Just one more thing, and I can do this for you if you like. Because of the way the mobile version of the site works, we're veering away from listing websites at the end of entries; they look a bit odd on mobile because the links won't work there in the same way. What we now do is pop those types of links into reference tags at the end of the entry and use descriptive TITLE tags in the link so they display nice and tidy in the right-hand margin.

Now, that's a lot to take in, so if you're alright with me doing it, we can take this as the new update and make it all happen.

Howzat sound?

It's ok by me if you want to do it but you might want to ask the others that are listed, but to be honest I can't see a problem. It's up to you if you want to ask them

Yes that's the best way to do it.

Everything looks ok to me, Reefgirl sorry it took me so long to get through it, well done!

Thanks Annie, no more updating for about 18 months or so, season 9 finished on tuesday night

On a formatting issue, can you split up all the paragraphs with s rather than s

Quite a few of the (pharses in brackets) have captial letters, they don't need them

Also Footnotes need full stops. Also check some of the paragraphs, they don't end with a . either


Points -- O'Neill is listed as Colonel, which was his orginal rank, but Carter is listed as Lt. Colonel a rank to which she was promoted a later series



Sergeant Davis was named Walter as a referrence to Cop. Walter Radar O'Reilly in M*A*S*H

He was also duplicated by alien’s intent on conquering Earth --> aliens

After the Promotion --> promotion


would point out that Cronos was neither Egyptian nor a god, he was a Greek Titan

Personally, I'd stick the names of the Tok'ra, replicators and goa'uld into lists. It helps split them up. Also the big black text -- ie Some Noteworthy Goa'ulds isn't (as far as I know) house style.


After the defeat of Anubis Baal broke an --> After the defeat of Anubis, Baal broke an

After the defeat of the System Lords Baal ended --> After the defeat of the System Lords, Baal ended


Didn't one episode explain that the replicators were orginally a children's toy created by a girl who SG-1 bumped into.

The Ori have been thwarted on a number of occasions by SG-1, once when they planned to build a giant stargate in space so they could invade our galaxy another time they used a plague to infect the population, only with Earths capitulation to origin would the plague be lifted, Sam Carter and a 'Humanised Ancient' called Orlin managed to create an antidote. --> This needs to be rewritten into a couple of sentences. Earths --> Earth's



Shortly after SG-1 encounter the Tok'ra (which literally means 'against Ra') ---> I think the name explaination should come when talking about the Tok'ra in general.


worth mentioning the Asgard who replaced Thor in the later series / Loki ?

Ok I'll see to it

Loki didn't replace Thor, to my knowledge Thor hasn't been replaced, Loki was a renagade scientist who turned Jack O'Neill into a 15 year old boy and Kvasir (Who turned up in Ripple Effect and Crusade) is a scientist as well

All done

I thought there was a 3rd Asgard in the later seasons who liased with the the SGC, I remember Carter saying that she prefered Thor to the new one

Kvasir only appeared in season 9, Freyr appeared in S5, apart from Thor they're the only ones I think that have appeared more than once, Hermiod hasn't appeared in Sg-1 has he?

Phew - sorry for the delays on this one. As you might be able to tell by all the announcements recently, we're mad busy.

It's my pleasure to declare this entry officially updated!

Editorial Note: This conversation has been moved from 'Stargate SG-1 - The TV Series (Update)' to 'Stargate SG-1 - the TV Show'.

Thanks Jimster, I don't want to be picky but do I get a Name check on the piece?