A Conversation for Speedos - A Brief Variety of Men's Swimwear

A20109052 - Speedos - Update

Post 61

Rudest Elf


smiley - sorry there's another 'also' nearby - I'm sure you'll think of something. smiley - biggrin

smiley - reindeer


A20109052 - Speedos - Update

Post 62

U168592

All attended to Monsewer Rudee. smiley - winkeye

For ease of slipping into them -

Entry: Speedos - Update - A20109052
Author: Matt - U168592

A Mostly Harmless Update of an Old writing team entry A2151.


A20109052 - Speedos - Update

Post 63

Rudest Elf


smiley - ok Talk about speedy!!

smiley - reindeer


A20109052 - Speedos - Update

Post 64

U168592

Faster than a goanna up a gum tree smiley - winkeye


A20109052 - Speedos - Update

Post 65

U168592

Think this is finished now smiley - smiley


A20109052 - Speedos - Update

Post 66

Rudest Elf


Hi Matt! smiley - biggrin

Just something to consider while you wait:

smiley - biro

Great phrase, but it's hard to imagine how "An underpant-like garment with a simple drawstring" could possibly achieve that smiley - bigeyes .

smiley - biro Intro 2nd dot: Add comma after 'water'

smiley - biro Wearing Speedos 3rd para: (swimming pool)?

smiley - reindeer


A20109052 - Speedos - Update

Post 67

U168592

hmm.

Considered and updated.

Good to go I think smiley - smiley


A20109052 - Speedos - Update

Post 68

U168592

smiley - boing


A20109052 - Speedos - Update

Post 69

Gnomon - time to move on

I know very little about the politics and fashion of men's swimwear. When someone says "speedos" to me, I think of those all over body suits that are made from lycra. Although when I look at my own togs, which are like a pair of short trousers, with a pull-string waist and pockets, I see they are speedos too.


A20109052 - Speedos - Update

Post 70

Mina

Any comments on that Matt?


A20109052 - Speedos - Update

Post 71

U168592

I've rewritten some of the introducing section to infer how Speedos can be a generic term for many types of swimwear now smiley - ok

Am happy with this now smiley - smiley


A20109052 - Speedos - Update

Post 72

Mina

According to Gnomon - and the official website - these close-fitting speedos aren't the only style they make, so it might need a tweak to the title.


A20109052 - Speedos - Update

Post 73

Gnomon - time to move on

Perhaps "Skin-tight Speedos"?


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Post 74

U168592

'Speedos - The Briefest Variety of Men's Swimwear'

What about that for a title?


A20109052 - Speedos - Update

Post 75

Mina

How about 'A Brief Variety'?


A20109052 - Speedos - Update

Post 76

U168592

Agreed smiley - ok


A20109052 - Speedos - Update

Post 77

Mina

In that case I think we're good to go. Any one prepared to argue?


A20109052 - Speedos - Update

Post 78

U168592

No arguments from me smiley - smiley


A20109052 - Speedos - Update

Post 79

Rudest Elf


Thought you might go for something a bit snappier, Matt, like 'Speedoman - in Briefs...Naturally! smiley - bigeyeshttp://www.dreamstime.com/speedoman-image402800

Doesn't bare thinking about, really...............smiley - run

smiley - reindeer


A20109052 - Speedos - Update

Post 80

U168592

I thought there was a rule about you putting snaps from your own album online Rudy. smiley - tongueout The Costa Del Sol hasn't been the same since...smiley - winkeye


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