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Post 21

friendlywithteeth

Then I won't smiley - smiley

I was wondering whether you could do me a favour [or probably my pride smiley - winkeye] I was wondering if you could tell me what my poem is about?

I know it sounds silly, but I just wanted to make sure that the message is clear...


E.E

Post 22

Lemmings-go-splat -- Loopy loo's here!

E.E told me to read this entry.

its brill.

anyway, come talk to me and help me coz i am new around here and lost...


E.E

Post 23

Lemmings-go-splat -- Loopy loo's here!

p.s

i have no idea what your poem is about... sorry


E.E

Post 24

friendlywithteeth

Hiya!

smiley - runs over to your personal space to invade your space!


E.E

Post 25

Existential Elevator

*drops out of lurking*

It's about...well....the earth and the sky.

Unless I totally read that wrong....

[smiley - ta for ACEing LGS...]


E.E

Post 26

friendlywithteeth

smiley - erm It wasn't intended to be, but I can see where you're coming from!

What do you think Math?


E.E

Post 27

Matholwch - Brythonic Tribal Polytheist

Hi Fred smiley - smiley.

I hate it when people ask me to analyse their poems for meaning smiley - erm. Poetry, especially when it flows from within and only forms upon contact with the page, is often so personal a medium. Lacking the contextual landscape in which to put your words does make it almost impossible for me to find a road through it.

If I was to make a stab at this one I'd say it is a narrative of a discovery of a relationship to the divine nature of being (deep huh?).

Blessings,
Matholwch the Apostate /|\.


E.E

Post 28

Bodhisattva

Math,

Post 4000 awaits. After you...

Bod


E.E

Post 29

Matholwch - Brythonic Tribal Polytheist

Bod smiley - zen.

Too late, Jordan nabbed it smiley - biggrin.

Blessings,
Matholwch the Apostate /|\


E.E

Post 30

friendlywithteeth

smiley - smiley Have to make you work Math!

Hmmm...I'll tell you what I intended and you tell me if it fits.

Don't ask me where the idea popped from...but it's about this two tier society, the first part are those who are literally higher than the second: who carry the first on their backs. The lower tier are downtrodden... again literally and have little worth.

Then, the lower stumbles and falls, and so does the higher.... they realise, clumsily that they are interdependent, and both the same... which relates to our society through the economic North and the economic South...

Does that come through?


E.E

Post 31

Jordan

Oh! I thought it was about love, humanity and harmony. I took a few re-readings to get the meaning you intended from it. smiley - smiley

I got 4000 and I never even noticed it! I'll add this to my growing collection of significant posts... let's see... 2000, 4000... smiley - nahnah

- Jordan


E.E

Post 32

friendlywithteeth

Well they are kinda inter-related issues aren't they...

4000? I take it that's on the God thread...?

Incidently, there's a good Science vs Faith thread on 360...


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Post 33

Existential Elevator

Ah! That makes sense....smiley - smileysmiley - ok


E.E

Post 34

Matholwch - Brythonic Tribal Polytheist

Hi Fred smiley - smiley.

I can see the message you were trying to communicate now you have framed the context. Not much good with the cryptic me smiley - winkeye.

And wherefore art this science vs. faith debate?

Blessings,
Matholwch the Apostate /|\.


E.E

Post 35

friendlywithteeth

Glad it's buried in there somewhere!

It's slowed down a tad at <./>F106533?thread=229050&latest=1</.>


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Post 36

Boots

Nice one. I read your 'where it came from' reply and it put it in a new light. On first reading I saw it as two opponents on the battle field...actually quite liked it from that persepective. two people trying to claim the same ground then realising they are each others mirror, so why fight over the ground. Liked the bowman too, makes it timeless. Good work.
Take care
Boots


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Post 37

friendlywithteeth

Ta smiley - blush


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