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We're all going on a summer holiday

Post 1

Reefgirl (Brunel Baby)

I'm going to be away for 7 days as from monday so if I don't reply to any messages this is the reason why.

HPB you can have control of Co'bal
Craxus you can have control of Shaylar
AD you can have control of Elise

I'll be back on the 16th I hope

Also can you folks tahe a look at A2767665 and let me know what you think, it's no where near finished


We're all going on a summer holiday

Post 2

Scandrea

Have fun, Reef, and take pictures!

BTW- good article so far, but I think you need to rework the introduction.


We're all going on a summer holiday

Post 3

Reefgirl (Brunel Baby)

I will

What do you suggest for the intro


We're all going on a summer holiday

Post 4

Scandrea

First thing I'd do is leave out the "We all know the story.." because I sure didn't! smiley - biggrin

I'd present the facts in the introduction, and then introduce the psychic in the next section, also.


We're all going on a summer holiday

Post 5

Reefgirl (Brunel Baby)

smiley - ok

Thanks for the info

The re write will have to wait tho


We're all going on a summer holiday

Post 6

Apollyon - Grammar Fascist

Bye bye, have fun smiley - smiley

I just skimmed the entry, but I'd ditch the first header and change all the other subheaders to headers.


We're all going on a summer holiday

Post 7

Reefgirl (Brunel Baby)

smiley - ta all comments will be taken into account when I get home I promise


We're all going on a summer holiday

Post 8

Jackruss a Grand Master of Tea and Toast, Keeper of the comfy chair, who is spending a year dead for tax reasons! DNA!

Enjoy the hol's mate and see you when you get back!


smiley - biggrin


We're all going on a summer holiday

Post 9

Reefgirl (Brunel Baby)

Thanks Rev smiley - ok


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