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We're all going on a summer holiday
Reefgirl (Brunel Baby) Started conversation Aug 8, 2004
I'm going to be away for 7 days as from monday so if I don't reply to any messages this is the reason why.
HPB you can have control of Co'bal
Craxus you can have control of Shaylar
AD you can have control of Elise
I'll be back on the 16th I hope
Also can you folks tahe a look at A2767665 and let me know what you think, it's no where near finished
We're all going on a summer holiday
Scandrea Posted Aug 8, 2004
Have fun, Reef, and take pictures!
BTW- good article so far, but I think you need to rework the introduction.
We're all going on a summer holiday
Reefgirl (Brunel Baby) Posted Aug 8, 2004
I will
What do you suggest for the intro
We're all going on a summer holiday
Scandrea Posted Aug 8, 2004
First thing I'd do is leave out the "We all know the story.." because I sure didn't!
I'd present the facts in the introduction, and then introduce the psychic in the next section, also.
We're all going on a summer holiday
Apollyon - Grammar Fascist Posted Aug 9, 2004
Bye bye, have fun
I just skimmed the entry, but I'd ditch the first header and change all the other subheaders to headers.
We're all going on a summer holiday
Jackruss a Grand Master of Tea and Toast, Keeper of the comfy chair, who is spending a year dead for tax reasons! DNA! Posted Aug 9, 2004
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