h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Honey-
I'm so happy you've decided to write things down, I guess I had some part of it in our conversation last night, and that makes me even happier. I just wanted to state the obvious and say, that Rob ain't much different than Bob, which isn't your name, either, so I don't see the use in it, really...
You write very well, hun, but you must stop appologising- let it flow, don't control everything so much. If you need some really good advice about writing- ask Kingy, he's very good at it. Generally- your descriptions are really good, but the appologies just interrupt the continuity of the story, so either give them up, or make'm footnotes.

But MOST important- keep on writing! Don't stop!! You really need this, I can tell.

I love you

Elly

paranoer my love. pure and simle. I mean I wouldent use my real name, and I was going to explane later why I get called bob o I needed an differant name and it was what I could think of.

Ok. Yes, you've told me about that... So what would be your explanation- that you Rob...banks?

Oh, ok. Now I get it. But again- many people here know your name, some actually use it, like me, so is there a point, really?
Oh, well- it's your entry, and I'll just shut up.

If I wanted people not to talk about it it wouldent bew here, and you right I will change it at some point

I love you

Oh, sweety! I read it... I could see how upset you were writing it. And I would call you if I knew where you are, or how to comfort you...
And you've had to write it down twice!!
I just don't know what to say...

Bob, mate, what can I say... to be honest I don't, unfortunately, know you well enough to give to you anything but the broadest and most cloying of sympathy. There are people much closer to you who can do the job much better than I. I'm glad you wrote it down though, it shows that you have the strength to be honest about the thing which has shaped your life most, and more than anything I respect you for that. I don't know if it would, now, be of any use to you, but the offer that your dear Elly (so generously ) made on my behalf stands; if you want my help to 'pretty it up', edit it so that it runs nice and smoothly, format it in GuideML, whatever, I'm happy to do it for you, you know how to get in touch with me. If you want to leave it as it stands, I shan't be offended, don't worry . For now, though, I'll leave this thread to the two of you.

Kingy- I only offered that coz I knew you'd like to help, and that you're good at that. Take it as a complement- that's what it is.

No worries

Good.

al, trust me If I diddent want it commented on I wouldent have put it here. and yes if there is anything you can do to make it look better I would apreacheate it

I'm working on it, I'll send you an email...

thank you

Kingy
Mike

If you could just let me know on those points I queried I'll send you the final version... Mainly just place names that I don't know...

I will, proberbly tomorrow though need to find the speelings myself first

If you want, I can take a look at it, hun.

I didn't think you got to see that much of England... well, not the outdoors part, anyway...

I was talking about spelling!
No, I don't know much about England...And I guess you can really check the spelling by yourself, so I'll stop butting in.

Nah, the spelling's fine, that only took me an hour or two to fix...