h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Style Guru - A25876696
Author: spiderbaby - Alter ego - Queen Rasiera, wife of King Aladine, now banished to the wastelands of Breeg for her wickedness. - U247838

Don't all those Style programmes just make ya want to go out and buy some flying geese!

no! But they are creating show rooms, not homes, that's for sure.

This is neat. There seem to be lots of hidden rhymes, I haven't tried to see if there's a pattern or if you've scattered them the way you might have scattered your cushions. Either way, I like them.

Lovely, spiderbaby.

Flying geese ? My nan had ducks. But, we were poor.

But, not of these http://www.combecrafts.co.uk/knitting2.html (dogs)

I share your views on 'Ideal Homes' catalogues and magazines. The rooms might look nice in the pictures but you couldn't live there. .

I'm not always sure why you break the lines where you do in this poem - but I like the hidden rhymes.

Thanks all, for reading this one.

I am not sure why I put line breeaks where I do sometimes!
Mostly to 'direct' the reader I guess, to read it in the way I would speak it.

Ali

Evening

I like this one very much and I think it has a natural, confident flow to it.

Nicely done

S.P.

A belated thanks sinnerman.

x
spidey

I liked this a lot. It's very nicely done - all the twistiness and (as has been said) the unexpected rhymes.

And I now know what a butler sink is. Which is good. Or not.

Congratulations again spiderbaby , we'd like to add your 'Style Guru' to the UnderGuide.

It was good to see a piece of your's here again. It feels a while since the last.

Thanks for posting it here.