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A1082251 - The Isle of Man

Post 21

Ormondroyd

smiley - ok Thanks for explaining that, and please pardon my ignorance!


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Post 22

Gnomon - time to move on

Ignorance is an important element of Peer Review! smiley - biggrin If all the readers knew everything in the entry, they wouldn't notice the shortcomings in it.


A1082251 - The Isle of Man

Post 23

Gnomon - time to move on

I've added a very brief conclusion and a section on related BBCi links to finish it off nicely. I've put in Manxkez's figures on the relative contributions of tourism and finance to the island's economy.

I'm happy with this now.


A1082251 - The Isle of Man

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the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish

Sunny Day
Sweepin' the clouds away
On my way to wander round Castletown

Can you tell me how to get,
How to get to The Isle of Man ??


A1082251 - The Isle of Man

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Gnomon - time to move on

Good point! I forgot I was asked to provide some information on how to get there.smiley - run


A1082251 - The Isle of Man

Post 26

Gnomon - time to move on

Section "Getting to the island" added.


A1082251 - The Isle of Man

Post 27

Ormondroyd

Looks good to me! smiley - oksmiley - blackcat


A1082251 - The Isle of Man

Post 28

Woodpigeon

Six horned sheep? Cats with no tails? Nothing to do with the fact that Sellafield is right across from it? smiley - tongueoutsmiley - laugh

Great entry Gnomon - its all there and extremely well written as per usual.

I have a couple of very minor pedantic nitpicks - hope you don't mind.

United Kingdom Army? I never heard it being referred to as that - I always thought it was known as the British Army.

"the island specialised in tourism since the late 19th Century" --> the island has specialised?

Could "ex officio" be explained in a footnote?

"Since 2001, however, there are a couple of boats being subsidised to provide a 100 tonne herring quota to support the island kipper industry." - I'm not sure what you mean exactly - are they allowed to fish in the Irish Sea, or where?

smiley - cool


A1082251 - The Isle of Man

Post 29

Gnomon - time to move on

>>United Kingdom Army?
I'll change it. I was trying to get over the point that it is the army of a neighbouring country, but you're right. Its name is the British Army.

>>"the island specialised in tourism since the late 19th Century"
It used to say "has specialised" but it doesn't specialise anymore, so I'll change it to "had specialised".

>>Could "ex officio" be explained in a footnote?
I'll have to look it up. I just got that phrase off an official description.

>>"Since 2001, however, there are a couple of boats...
Pimms provided that paragraph. I'll have to ask him, unless he's looking at this.

smiley - ok


A1082251 - The Isle of Man

Post 30

Ormondroyd

According to my Penguin English Dictionary, 'ex officio' means 'by virtue or because of an office'. smiley - book


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Post 31

the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish

is it worth mentioning its use as a tax haven ?


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Post 33

Woodpigeon

Well done Gnomon!


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Post 34

the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish

well done ye


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Post 35

Ormondroyd

smiley - applause Well done Gnomon! smiley - biggrinsmiley - catsmiley - bubbly


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Post 36

Pimms

smiley - bubbly Gnomon (I've been away for a few days, otherwise I would have chipped in, but you seem to have covered the points raised without my assistance).

Pimms smiley - ok


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Post 37

Gnomon - time to move on

smiley - bubbly Thanks, everyone! And congratulations to Pimms, without whose help I could not have written this. smiley - bubbly


A1082251 - The Isle of Man

Post 38

Pimms

For the herring quota remark (found by googling on 'Manx kipper quota') my source was this entry from DIFRES:

"Isle of Man buys 100 tonne quota
Fishing News August 10 2001, page 1-2 (in English)

The article describes the attempt to bring back the herring fishery to Isle of Man. After no herring fishery at Isle of Man in 15 years, two boats from Manx now try to make a profitable fishery by supplying herring to the main kipper industry on the island. The local government has supported the herring fishery by purchasing a 100 tonne herring quota."

This appears to have been submitted in 2001 by Henrik Nielsen of DIFRES (the Danish Institute for Fisheries Research). What it means in terms of where and how the fish are caught I know no more than you smiley - erm

I accepted this since it was corroborated by information gained from other sources (that 'Manx smoked kippers' had for some years used the larger Norwegian herring, due to depleted stocks of herring in the Irish Sea)

I have no more detailed knowledge than that.

Pimms smiley - smiley


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