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Peer Review: A1033327 - The Pigeon Hive Mind

Post 1

snark king

Entry: The Pigeon Hive Mind - A1033327
Author: snark king - U226076

It's an interesting theory, so just give it some thought when you post.


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Post 2

Number Six

Great article, but in its current form, I'm afraid it's not the sort of thing that we're looking for in the Edited Guide - check out the Writing-Guidelines and hopefully you'll see what I mean.

Don't be discouraged - you're clearly a good writer and it's just a question of where and how to focus your talents if you'd like to contribute to h2g2... Peer Review is not the only place. The article would go down very well as it stands if you moved it to the Alternative Writing Workshop (<./>Writing-Alternative</.&gtsmiley - winkeye, and you could also submit it to the h2g2 newspaper, <./>ThePost</.>.

Cheers,
Number Six




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Post 3

snark king

How?


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Post 4

J

It's a personal narrative, and the <./>writing-guidelines</.> clearly state that stories should not be in the first person.

There are plenty of other places to submit it though smiley - ok

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 5

J

I see you submitted it to AWW. Would you mind taking this out of Peer Review for us? It really shouldn't be in both places

smiley - blacksheep


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