h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

I saw your comments Fair play!

Just one final thought about the scars. Because they are 'jagged' I had to think they were the result of violence or cruelty, possibly war.
If we are supposed to think they might be the result of wing removal (an act of God) surely they would be 'clean', 'almost imperceptable' and 'surgical' in appearance...

But then, I never could get my head around a 'vengeful' god only a 'just' one.

Deadline Tuesday morning.

peace
jwf

I can only respond with conjecture. If indeed those scars were the remnants of wings that had been removed, and indeed they had been removed by an act of God, then surely they would be clean and imperceptible. But we have two unconfirmed premises to that conconclusion, and a change of either one could result in jagged scars. Someone other than God might have removed the wings. Or there may never have been wings at all. We'll never know.

As for my comments on the footnotes, I don't think it would do the reader any harm to create the impression that the writer and editor have an antagonistic relationsip. It's all part of the show.

In that case I may repost the above two postings into the conversation.
~j~

It seems we understand each other perfectly, sir.

So... Did anyone read it? It seems we put an awful lot of work into it...

Someone, somewhere said our Valentine's issue was the best ever.

As vague at that may seem, it is perhaps the closest thing to what we used to call a compliment (now known as feedback) as we can expect from an audience that simply wants to be entertained. Considering what else was in that issue, such comments can only be seen as a positive reaction to your story.

As for 'anti-climax' , one of our future considerations at AggGag is to Categorise all previous entries. Thus all the Fiction, such as yours, would be grouped in a 'Storybook' type setting in addition to its permanent (immortalised) and accessable status in our <./>agggag-archives</.>

What else y'got? If we had more of your amorous adventures to publish, you could have your own 'Collected Works of' or 'The Amorous Adventures of' section. True Fame comes from a 'body' of work .
More please.
peace
jwf

A request for more? That certainly cheers me up.
I've got a few ideas in my head of what to put down next, one about a young girl in Sardinia, and another about a young girl in the Rhineland. Which woudl you like first?

Wasn't there one already written about a blonde cowgirl in Italy?
Have a look at that one and then let me know where it is. We could use it next and give you time to start working on the rest.

jwf

It's right here A588558. It's rather undeveloped, just a sketch from the notebooks of way back when...
Feel free to do whatever you will with it.

I have copied it to my page and becasue I added your name (number actually) to the 'researchers box' it should also be appearing on your homepage as an entry called 'Corrie 2', so you can follow my progress when I start to revise it a bit. Your original should still be there as well of course.
I'll get to it ...soon.
Let me know how the others are coming along. No rush.
peace
jwf