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CF: A6583566 - 'Mission: Impossible' - The TV Series

Post 1

Gnomon - time to move on

A6583566

I have made the following changes and corrections to this entry.

that that had --> that had
Jim's Office --> Jim's office

Phelps's plans were incredibly intricate and seemingly player's parts were scripted whether they knew it or not!
-- there's something wrong with that but I can't figure out what. Any suggestions?

smiley - smiley G


CF: A6583566 - 'Mission: Impossible' - The TV Series

Post 2

Trin Tragula

A suggestion, certainly:

"Phelps's plans were incredibly intricate and, seemingly, all the parts were scripted whether the players knew it or not!"

(Might even drop some ellipses or a dash between 'scripted' and 'whether')


CF: A6583566 - 'Mission: Impossible' - The TV Series

Post 3

Trin Tragula

Oo. Hey. Just spotted where I am smiley - biggrinsmiley - run


CF: A6583566 - 'Mission: Impossible' - The TV Series

Post 4

Gnomon - time to move on

I've changed it to:

"Phelps's plans were incredibly intricate and it seemed like every player's part was scripted, whether they knew it or not!"

as per the author's suggestion at:

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