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Gnomon - time to move on Started conversation Jan 3, 2006
A6583566
I have made the following changes and corrections to this entry.
that that had --> that had
Jim's Office --> Jim's office
Phelps's plans were incredibly intricate and seemingly player's parts were scripted whether they knew it or not!
-- there's something wrong with that but I can't figure out what. Any suggestions?
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CF: A6583566 - 'Mission: Impossible' - The TV Series
Trin Tragula Posted Jan 3, 2006
A suggestion, certainly:
"Phelps's plans were incredibly intricate and, seemingly, all the parts were scripted whether the players knew it or not!"
(Might even drop some ellipses or a dash between 'scripted' and 'whether')
CF: A6583566 - 'Mission: Impossible' - The TV Series
Trin Tragula Posted Jan 3, 2006
Oo. Hey. Just spotted where I am 
CF: A6583566 - 'Mission: Impossible' - The TV Series
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Jan 4, 2006
I've changed it to:
"Phelps's plans were incredibly intricate and it seemed like every player's part was scripted, whether they knew it or not!"
as per the author's suggestion at:
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