A Conversation for Kath and Kim

A1047359 - Kath and Kim

Post 21

The Professor

Wow, just the beginning was confusing. I think this needs a real introduction. A whole paragraph telling what it is you'll be talking about before diving right in.

The Professor
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A1047359 - Kath and Kim

Post 22

Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

Personally, I felt that the first two paragraphs made for quite a nice introduction. They might be strengthened a bit by some of the information in post #20, but they definitely constitute an introduction to the entry.

What else do you think needs to be included in the introduction, Professor? Any specific ideas?

smiley - mouse


A1047359 - Kath and Kim

Post 23

Daravak

Wow, thanks for all the comments guys - sorry I haven't replied for so long, I've been real busy. I'll work on putting all of your suggestions into the entry.


A1047359 - Kath and Kim

Post 24

Cyzaki

Can you remove the first header? It's not needed and the sub would only remove it anyway.

smiley - panda


A1047359 - Kath and Kim

Post 25

Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

Hmmmm.... smiley - erm


A1047359 - Kath and Kim

Post 26

Geggs

Aye, hmmmm.....

Yon researcher appeared to have performed the action of an Elvis.

Therefore I propose this valiant entry be move to the Market of the Flea.


Geggs


A1047359 - Kath and Kim

Post 27

GreyDesk


Yeah, what he said.


A1047359 - Kath and Kim

Post 28

DrMatt

All right, let me see what I can do with this...

Matt


A1047359 - Kath and Kim

Post 29

The Professor

this one has certainly been dug out of the graveyard

The Professor
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