A Conversation for Colchester, Essex, England

Writing Workshop: A1030438 - Colchester, Essex, England

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Sanx Started conversation Apr 23, 2003

Entry: Colchester, Essex, England - A1030438
Author: Researcher 183345 - U183345

Any hints for making this flow a little better?

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Mammuthus Primigenius Posted Apr 23, 2003

Hi 183345, welcome to h2g2

Looks fine to me, well done.smiley - ok
Just a couple of suggestions: In the history section you jump a millenium from the romans to the normans very quickly. You could add a sentence to acknowledge that Colchester did exist in the time between.
And you mention the Dutch quarter, how did it get its name? What's the Netherlands connection.

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Sanx Posted Apr 23, 2003

Thanks for the hints, Mammuthus Primigenius.

I'll work in a few sentences to that effect.

Thanks once again.

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