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Peer Review: A962831 - Tricycles

Post 1

OmegaD

Entry: Tricycles - A962831
Author: OmegaD - U215337

Looking through the guide i found no articles on tricycles, one of the classic children's toys. I had a tricycle when i was but a young whipper-snapper.


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Post 2

Mich

I don't know. Nothing in the article really catches my attention or makes me want to read more. I don't know quite what you could do. You obviously know a bit about tricycles...


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Post 3

Mina

Don't forget that there are bigger tricycles as well. My mum often uses one when she visits Holland.


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Post 4

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

Oh, the entry's been Moderated. Probably because of a broken link. You'll get an e-mail explaining why.

I have a friend who has a lower limb problem and he was advised to get a tricycle. Apparently they're also used for people with epilepsy, so there is stuff that you could add on adult tricycles.

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 5

OmegaD

I'll work on that adult tricycle thing. Also, the company names have been removed in favor of generic descriptions of these companies.smiley - blush


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Post 6

Ausnahmsweise, wie üblich (Consistently inconsistent)

Hi,

You could explain a bit more about the differences between the child's and the adult's. The adult version is usually driven by (one) back wheel, via a chain. The child's as you said, by a crank directly on the front wheel's axle (no gears).

You could link to this if you think it's relavant A593291

Awu.



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Post 7

Number Six

I suppose you've got two choices - change the title to 'Childrens Tricycles' and continue along your present theme, or expand it to include adult tricycles which, as mentioned above, are a far more serious proposition - somewhere in between a bike and a pedal-powered road vehicle.

Some organic fruit & veg companies in London deliver using tricycles, taking advantage of their relative stability by fitting a big box on the back and attaching a trailer to them. Also, rickshaw taxis here started operating in Soho and although I can't remember precisely right now, I think those are also tricycular in design - rider sits upfront steering a single front wheel and the passengers sit between the rear wheels.


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Post 8

Trout Montague

Refer to 'trikes'



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Post 9

OmegaD

I am working out the adult trike angle, and am researching other uses than play.


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Post 10

Number Six

These links might help - London-based rickshaw/pedicab etc stuff, most of which are tricycular...

http://www.bugbugs.co.uk/
http://www.londonpedicabs.com/
http://www.londonbicycle.com/rickshaws.html


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Post 11

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

It might be interesting to add that tricycles are one way that disabled people are able to cycle. I was looking for suggestions for a friend with a mobility problem and getting a trike was suggested. They're also used by people with epilepsy, I gather.

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 12

Spelugx the Beige, Wizard, Perl, Thaumatologically Challenged

The entry's quite short atm, but there's lots of suggestions above on adding things. One thing I would say as a <./>subeditor</.> is that I would either remove the first heading or move it further down to give an introductory paragraph at the top of the article

spelugx


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Post 13

Number Six

Are you planning to do any more on this one, OmegaD? It could really do with expanding a bit if you'd like it to be an all-encompassing entry on Tricycles... although if you changed it to 'Children's Tricycles' and took out the Adult part you'd be a lot closer to the finished article.

I agree, by the way, that you could afford to lose the 'What are they' heading at the top...


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Post 14

Spelugx the Beige, Wizard, Perl, Thaumatologically Challenged

Looks like the author has gone and abandoned this, last posting back on the 20th of Feb, so in a few days this'll get moved over to the flea market if any one wants to pick it up.

spelugx


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Post 15

Number Six

Me! Me! Me!

Pleeeeease!!!

smiley - mod


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Post 16

Spelugx the Beige, Wizard, Perl, Thaumatologically Challenged

Great!

All you need to do is visit <./>test962831</.> and copy the guideml/plaintext into a new article which you can then submit to peerreview. You (or me) can then write into the scouts forum with a move back to entry of this thread. It's also polite to give a reference to the new article here and on the author's PS so that they can track it down if they do return.

spelugx -- <./>scout</.>


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Post 17

Number Six

Thanks - will do, although not immediately!

Is it OK to do this without going through Flea Market? I'm not quite sure of all the procedural whatnot...

smiley - mod


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Post 18

Spelugx the Beige, Wizard, Perl, Thaumatologically Challenged

It's fine doing this without going through the flea market, since it mainly acts as a repository of entries, and not a place with conversation.

spelugx


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Post 19

Trout Montague

Flea Market. This and Tank Tops.


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Post 20

Trout Montague

http://www.totallyabsurd.com/tricyclelawnmower.htm


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