h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

It's really good, so don't go changing too much. Post when you're done and I'll read it over again.

Speckly - determined to nitpick the boss's work

*settles down expectantly in front row seat*

anyone ?

I'll be working on it this weekend - printing it out and working on it on my laptop.

I'm just too busy to stay in one place though!

Alright, I've refinished this I've taken out some and replaced some and written in some.

Should I put it back into the AWW? Would you like to rip it apart there, Speckly?

I love it, I think it should be in AWW. I can't remember the first version too well but I have the impression this reads more smoothly. I think you've hit the right balance between the detail and the summary. Over to Speckly for the eye for detail.

You're a class act Jodan .

Of course this should be in the AWW. It's fab!

I do have one nit pick for your newly revamped version. Commas. There are quite a few misused commas in this piece. Do you want a list?

speckly.

Hi Waz Hi Speckly. Thanks.

Commas.
I hate the little things when it comes to proofreading. I'll go over it myself instead of putting you to work.

You will put it back into the AWW when you're done won't you?

Certainly.

Don't look now, but it's in the AWW again!
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