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A973749 - The Healing Powers of Windex

Post 41

nadia

It's really good, so don't go changing too much. Post when you're done and I'll read it over again. smiley - smiley

Speckly - determined to nitpick the boss's work


A973749 - The Healing Powers of Windex

Post 42

LL Waz

*settles down expectantly in front row seat*

smiley - popcorn anyone smiley - smiley?


A973749 - The Healing Powers of Windex

Post 43

J

I'll be working on it this weekend - printing it out and working on it on my laptop. smiley - smiley

I'm just too busy to stay in one place though!

smiley - blacksheep


A973749 - The Healing Powers of Windex

Post 44

J

Alright, I've refinished this smiley - smiley I've taken out some and replaced some and written in some.

Should I put it back into the AWW? Would you like to rip it apart there, Speckly? smiley - smiley

smiley - blacksheep


A973749 - The Healing Powers of Windex

Post 45

LL Waz

smiley - laugh I love it, I think it should be in AWW. I can't remember the first version too well but I have the impression this reads more smoothly. I think you've hit the right balance between the detail and the summary. Over to Speckly for the eye for detail.

You're a class act Jodan smiley - smiley.


A973749 - The Healing Powers of Windex

Post 46

nadia

Of course this should be in the AWW. It's fab!

I do have one nit pick for your newly revamped version. Commas. There are quite a few misused commas in this piece. Do you want a list?

speckly.


A973749 - The Healing Powers of Windex

Post 47

J

Hi Waz smiley - smiley Hi Speckly. Thanks.

Commas.
I hate the little things when it comes to proofreading. I'll go over it myself instead of putting you to work.

smiley - blacksheep


A973749 - The Healing Powers of Windex

Post 48

nadia

You will put it back into the AWW when you're done won't you?


A973749 - The Healing Powers of Windex

Post 49

J

Certainly.

Don't look now, but it's in the AWW again!
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smiley - blacksheep


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