A Conversation for James Bond in the Cold War

Peer Review: A87773403 - James Bond in the Cold War

Post 1

Bluebottle

Entry: James Bond in the Cold War - A87773403
Author: Bluebottle - U43530

This is a Flea Market Rescue.
Original Entry: James Bond in the Cold War - A51925962
Author: littlesimon1 - U13980914

The name's Bottle. Blue Bottle
And to celebrate the 50th Anniversary of the release of Dr. No, I thought I'd rescue this from the Flea Market.
Do I expect you to talk?
No, Mr Bond, I expect you to review this article.

<BB<


A87773403 - James Bond in the Cold War

Post 2

Danny B

Very nice - well rescued! smiley - applause


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Post 3

Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

smiley - smiley I'm not really a great James Bond fan - although I saw most films - but I think this is a very interesting Entry.


A87773403 - James Bond in the Cold War

Post 4

Lanzababy - Guide Editor

Yes, this is a good rescue BB - well done.


The paragraph about the Cuban missile crisis has a lot of repetitions, which make it hard going for the reader. Could you do some smoothing or introduce alternatives or synonyms? That would improve its readability.


A87773403 - James Bond in the Cold War

Post 5

Bluebottle

Is this better?

<BB<


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Post 6

Lanzababy - Guide Editor

Yes smiley - biggrinsmiley - ok

That's much better - thanks BB

smiley - tea


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Post 7

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

Nice rescue. Like Tav, I am NOT a James Bond fan, and unlike her, I've only seen a few of the films.

But the analysis was good. smiley - smiley


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Post 8

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Is Mr Bond ready for the next step towards the EG?

GB
smiley - galaxysmiley - diva


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Post 9

Bluebottle

I'm happy if everyone else is.

<BB<


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Recommended for the Edited Guide!

Post 10

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Post 11

Tavaron da Quirm - Arts Editor

congratulations!smiley - biggrin


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Recommended for the Edited Guide!

Post 12

Danny B

smiley - applause


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Recommended for the Edited Guide!

Post 13

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

smiley - applausesmiley - pggb Shaken, not stirred. smiley - run


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Recommended for the Edited Guide!

Post 14

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - applause


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Recommended for the Edited Guide!

Post 15

Bluebottle

smiley - applauseWell done littlesimon1 - U13980914

<BB<


Subbie calling

Post 16

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

PR thread readsmiley - biro


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