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Peer Review: A87752208 - The Kinder Trespass

Post 1

Elentari

Entry: The Kinder Trespass - A87752208
Author: Elentari - U202814

The 80th anniversary of the Trespass is on April 24th, so it seemed an opportune time.

I have some pictures of Kinder Scout which could go in this in time.


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Post 2

aka Bel - A87832164

How interesting! I never knew this. I think we may have privately owned forests here (which are probably open to the public), but I've never heard of privately owned mountains. smiley - bigeyes


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Post 3

Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky.

Excellent, Elentari smiley - smiley

I can't believe we haven't got an entry on this.

I'll just leave this here:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=knzUMCZX8-w


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Post 4

Elentari

Thanks, both. I was surprised we didn't already have an entry too. It's quite an important event in the right to roam movement.


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Post 5

Elentari

Any more comments?


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Post 6

Lanzababy - Guide Editor

I'm sorry I didn't comment earlier on this piece - it seems faultless. smiley - applause

We live near the Peak district, and as far as we know, one of our relations who was a committed rambler took part in this trespass, sadly he is no longer alive or I could ask him for a verbatim account.

Good luck with this Entry - it deserves a place in the Guide. Thank you for submitting it, and so well written I can't even think of anything that needs adding.


Lanzababy


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Post 7

Elentari

That's very kind, thanks Lanzababy!


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Post 8

Elektragheorgheni -Please read 'The Post'

Great entry. I loved the ending you chose!smiley - smiley


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Post 9

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

Hey, this is really interesting. smiley - biggrin As an outsider, though, I felt that you rather buried the lead. At the end, you explain what a landmark event this was, but I wasn't expecting it, because I thought public access was an ancient right in Britain.

Could you maybe add a bit at the beginning to foreshadow this for dummies? One more sentence in the first paragraph would do it. Something like, 'This act of trespass, and the trial that followed, inspired a movement that led to freer public access to nature in the UK.'


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Post 10

KB

Far from it Dmitri - you could trace the battles for public access to land back centuries, if you wanted. In a real sense, the Kinder Scout trespassers were the heirs to the Diggers and Levellers of the 1640s...

Good Entry, Elentari. I'd love to see it on the FP for the anniversary.

smiley - eureka And I've just thought of a complementary piece I'll have to write.


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Post 11

Z

Great entry. I love the fact I live in Scotland, where we now have no laws of Tresspass..

smiley - biggrin


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Post 12

Elentari

I've added an extra sentence which should help, Dmitri. Is that better?

Thanks for the comments, all!


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Post 13

Researcher 14993127

Blimey, I've lost count the number of times I've strolled up Kinder Scout and never knew the history of access to it. smiley - blush
Thats what you get for taking things for granted. smiley - biggrin
Great piece, well done Elantari. smiley - ok

smiley - cat


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Post 14

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

That's perfect, Elentari, thanks! smiley - smiley


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Post 15

minorvogonpoet


I enjoyed this article - it's a good read and very informative. smiley - smiley

A couple of comments.
In the 3rd sentence, you've said that the Kinder Trespass was one of the events that led to the 'wide-ranging land access rights currently enjoyed in the UK'. But, as post 11 mentions, I thought the law was always different in Scotland.

Is it worth mentioning that the National Council of Ramblers' Federations had existed since 1931 but, after the Trespass, it was reinvented as the Ramblers' Association?


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Post 16

Elentari

Good point, mvp. I'l change that.

Unless the Ramblers Association was renamed / otherwise changed as a result of the Kinder Trespass I don't think it needs to go in.


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Post 17

KB

It's probably worth changing that, yes: access rights in Scotland are far ahead of those in England and Wales, and NI is more restricted still.

I was wondering whether it would be worth making the role of the Communist Party more explicit - it wasn't completely red scare tactics by the prosecution, the CP really did play a very important role in campaigning for ordinary people to have access to the countryside.


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Post 18

Elentari

Do you have any more information on that, KB? Or can you suggest somewhere I might look? I haven't come accross much on that.


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Post 19

Elentari

I've added a couple of mentions of the Communists, does that cover it, do you think?


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Post 20

Bluebottle

A great articlesmiley - applause. I would perhaps mention that the Duke of Devonshire owned vast (not to understate that it is vast) amounts of land nationwide, including Chatsworth House, Bolton Abbey in Yorkshire as well as a castle in Waterford and land in Eastbourne. They weren't trespassing in someone's back garden. (The family portrayed in the film 'The Duchess')
One thing I would change is where you wrote: ' The group was There had been other', one of those minor things which gets overlooked.

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