h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Hints and Tips for Survival Horror Fun - A8658525
Author: Serephina - U191719

Any improvement in this one?

Nope, it's perfect.

Thanks!

I was being sarcastic, but if it makes you feel better....

It's pretty good, but I am still confused as to what exactly a horror game is. Is it a video game? That's sort of what it sounds like to me, and if so, I don't think the Entry explains that. I have never heard of this, so I have no clue what it is.

Yea, sorry, I agree S. You need to substantiate just what kind of Horror Game you imply - I used to play 'Murder in the Dark' when I was wee, but I don't think this applies

Oh, and you have a 'survuval' instead of a survival in the conclusion.

(and I still think some examples of the games you can get to play is a good idea )

Sorry I'm not very good at spotting written sarcasm especially when as ill/doped up as I am at the moment. I guess I also wasnn't expecting it as I was sincerely asking if it had I had managed to improve it at all it was last in review . sorry.

I'm sorry, too. I shouldn't have been sarcastic in the first place.

Updated a little

Now that's cracking!

I like little Entries about stuff we see and do. Sereph.

I'll bang on about my usual now, add some linking blahblahblahrhubarbrhubarbrhubarb

*wanders away to dust off his PS1 copy of Resident Evil.*

Those dogs still scare the bejeebus outta me, even when I KNOW they're coming.

have you seen the front page today? ?

the dogs still scare me too

added acouple of links, trying to find some more. Shout with any suggestions/plugs

Suggestions?

Send me !

EnemiesLook out for a weakness, they all have one. Once you have studied your enemy and know it's strong and weak points you will live longer.

Enemies(space)Look out for a weakness, they all have one. Once you have studied your enemy and know it(unnecessary apostrophe)'s strong and weak points you will live longer.

Ellipses have three periods ...

And here's an EG Entry that you might like to link to A647868

I do have some chocchip cookies I could be persuaded to share ...

Updated

You need another space in 'rapidly beating heartto keep you company'

The two lists would look better with the use of a hyphen surrounded by spaces after each bold phrase (eg Healing Items - You) along with tagged bullet points:

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Any chance you could FEAR (A13345049) in the list of scary video games - it's very atmospheric and works perfectly in a dark room...

Will do

Looks much improved.

I would request, though, that the next time you submit something to PR that you've had in PR before that you include a link to the old PR thread -- not only can it save some backing and forthing, but it's important for the current crop of reviewers to be able to check and see if the previous issues had been addressed.