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Post 1

Luvian

Entry: The Luvians - A865253
Author: Luvian - U207660

I promise to everyone that if yo like any of the following:
1) Old skool punk bands (Ramones, Blondie, Stooges)
2) The Strokes
3) White Stripes
4) YeahYeahYeahs
5) Non-cheesy girl groups
6) Any garage rock band.

You will love this band. Its hard to find anything on them, but if you would like to know anything, i do have their fan e-list addy?? they usually give quite a bit of info on that about once a month? if you would like it, leave a message.


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Post 2

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

Hi Luvian,

I've never heard of this band, so perhaps I am not the best person to comment.

However I do know what makes a good entry. As you're new to the site (welcomesmiley - smiley), it might be good gor you to have a look at the <./>Writing-guidelines</.> to see what is likely to make it to the Front Page. You can also see examples of good entries. You'll see that they are usually structured to make them easy to read and that they are written in the third person. As it stands, this entry will need work if you want it to be recommended and edited.

As it stands, I did not feel that I had learned much, as I think you've written it assuming that people know about them.

Good luck! Let me know if you need any help, by either clicking on the reply button or leaving me a message on my site.

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 3

Spiff


Hi Luvian, smiley - smiley

This is interesting enough, and nicely written, but as ZSF says, not really edited guide material as it stands. smiley - sadface

do take a closer look at the PR page, and/or the guidelines as linked above.

In the meantime, you wouldn't happen to have some kind of personal connection with these Rockettes, by any chance? smiley - winkeye

and i couldn't help a twinge of cynical doubt when you said they wouldn't want publicity from false rumours... methinks the ladies do protest too much! smiley - biggrin Anyway, what could be more rock 'n' roll?

all the best with this and future writings
spiff


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Post 4

Noggin the Nog

Ah. THOSE Luvians. I thought you were talking about the early Bronze Age people from Asia Minor. Sorry. *wanders off*

Noggin


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Post 5

Oberon2001 (Scout)

smiley - erm Is it just me, or is a perfect candidate for the GR movement?
Oberon2001


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Post 6

Z

Seconded!


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Post 7

The GR Manoeuvre --- a posting a day keeps the reaper away

right, and duly noted for the next batch of moves.

Bossel


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