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theannualgiftman

Entry: Visiting a Small Town - A860690
Author: theannualgiftman - U207585

A few helpful hints for travellers wishing to stop in a small town.


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Tube - the being being back for the time being

Hi and welcome to the guide! smiley - smiley

Um... welllll. I do thing that this entry has the potential to make it into the edited guide. However, it'll need some more refinement. While the humorous side is good, it needs more along the lines of facts. For example you should qualify the region the "Small Town" is in. Canada or similar from the entry I guess due to the ice-fishing. The entry would, for example, not apply to a small town in Germany or Japan (just for the language alone smiley - winkeye). Maybe re-work it as "Visiting a Small Town in [region/country]"?

smiley - cheers
Tube


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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

"Farmer Spit" Where I come from, we call that a snot rocket smiley - biggrin

I think too that this has potential, but it would be very easy to let it slide into your average email circular 'funny'.
Let's wait a while and see if the author would care to expand it some smiley - smiley


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Post 4

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

where the "first New Years' baby was born in August" smiley - laugh


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Post 5

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

hmm... shall we move it to the AWW?


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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

Let's smiley - smiley


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Post 7

a girl called Ben

Shame - it is so nearly good. Oh well...

B


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