A Conversation for Tanks 2 - this time it's personal

Peer Review: A859449 - Tanks - an Alternative View

Post 1

Who?

Entry: Tanks - an Alternative View - A859449
Author: Who? - U202489

This is the negative side of Tanks. (Some people think they're all negative.)


A859449 - Tanks - an Alternative View

Post 2

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

I like this entrysmiley - cool, Who? and I liked the training story. Is it apocryphal or did it really happen?

smiley - ermIt might need a bit of tweaking to meet the Edited Guide guidelines, though. Entries are meant to be in the third person, which you can do fairly easily, I think. just make the 'I' sentences passive or use 'this Researcher'.

The other thing that it might come up against (and it would be a pity, as I really like it) is on the subject of balance. Entries are supposed to be balanced (see the Writing-Guidelines. However, I like this as it is. What do other Researchers think?

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 3

NAITA (Join ViTAL - A1014625)

I like it. smiley - smiley


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Post 4

McKay The Disorganised

Brilliant - smiley - laugh


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Post 5

Who?

Incident - the driver was me before I took my driving course.


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Post 6

Who?

In addition, on the subject of balance, I wrote the TANKS entry. Perhaps this should be Tanks 2?


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Post 7

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

smiley - ok


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Post 8

the third man(temporary armistice)n strike)

Tanks II - This time it's personnal!


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Post 9

sprout

I like it.

How about Tanks - a users perspective?

Sprout


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Post 10

tom

Great.Don't change a thing.


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Post 11

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Your Guide Entry has just been picked from Peer Review by one of our Scouts, and is now heading off into the Editorial Process, which ends with publication in the Edited Guide. We've therefore moved this Review Conversation out of Peer Review and to the entry itself.

If you'd like to know what happens now, check out the page on 'What Happens after your Entry has been Recommended?' at EditedGuide-Process. We hope this explains everything.

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Post 12

the third man(temporary armistice)n strike)

Excellent! I'm pleased that this made itsmiley - ok


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