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Peer Review: A837498 - No Shoes

Post 1

~TWIsTED~

Entry: No Shoes - A837498
Author: ~TWIsTED~ - U203711

reveiw please, ta


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Post 2

The GR Manoeuvre --- a posting a day keeps the reaper away

Hi there!

This is very nice, but unfortunately it is not suitable for Peer Review, as stated in the other threads. A good starting point for Peer Review would be to read the Writing-Guidelines and also this: A818822

If you did put this in the Alternative Writing Workshop, it would actually get reviewed for the content, but as it is in the wrong place, I'm afraid that all you'll get is probably requests to move it out of this Forum to the AWWsmiley - biggrin

Good luck with that!

Caper Plipsmiley - runsmiley - football


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Post 3

~TWIsTED~

I have to say, you realy are a man on a mission arnt you?.......i am touched by your concern, when ive time i will look for the creative writing bit, as i say, i treat this place as just a message board, if people see my stuff then cool, if not then so be it......One thing, why do so many people take all this so seriously? I mean its good and all and im happy to link up via the t-west email facility its just a curiosity of mine, there seems so much writing and programming tallent on here i wonder why they or indeed your good self devout so much time to this when you could do something
more productive with your skills?......I will add here that all my poetry is copyright, already, its old stuff, i just thought id share it, i only submitted it to reveiw to see if it was any good still. ....cheers.


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Post 4

The GR Manoeuvre --- a posting a day keeps the reaper away

Well, actually I'm female, but oh wellsmiley - biggrin

Don't worry, your poetry is very good... it's just in the wrong placesmiley - biggrin


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Post 5

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

If you want your seed to grow, you have to plant it in the right soil.smiley - smiley

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 6

Smij - Formerly Jimster

I don't think Paula Nancy Millstone Jennings will be losing any sleep over this... smiley - smiley

Jims


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Post 7

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

smiley - laugh I've known that saying for ages!

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 8

Ommigosh

smiley - laugh
Jimster, what a wonderful remark!!
Brilliant.


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Post 9

Spiff


Er, hi Twisted. You're not very friendly, are you. smiley - sadface

Never mind, you seem to like yourself enough to make up for it.

smiley - popcorn

I'm glad to say something positive (for me) has come from these rather unwholesome threads that have suddenly flooded PR.

I wondered who this unknown multi-named poet could be, so i got googlin' and found out.

it was this site that informed me:

http://hhgproject.org/entries/jennings.html

Rather a good little DB about the h2g2 series, I thought. I already felt that I had forgotten at least half of the stuff in the books and this site was able to confirm my suspicions.

cya
spiff


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Post 10

Smij - Formerly Jimster

Ceefax Subtitles provided by Spiff smiley - winkeye


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Post 11

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

I think this bears out the hypothesis;

'You don't see life as it is, you see life as *you* are.

smiley - zen

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 12

Smij - Formerly Jimster

'I know what you are, but what am I?'

My fave quote from Peewee Herman.


'Nyer nyer na nyer nyer'

My fave quote from Ghengis Khan. smiley - smiley


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Post 13

Dr Hell

heya... What's DB?

Can someone give that twister guy/gal a warning-shot?

HELL


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Post 14

Spiff


er, DB was sposed to mean data-base. smiley - smiley


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Post 15

McKay The Disorganised

The japanese proverb isn't original either - its actually a line from - (I think) Emo Phillips.

I think that 'I complained because I had no shoes, but then I met a man who had no feet.' is biblical.


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Post 16

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

Hell,

I have posted an ACE type message on his/her site, pointing out where the postings would be better suited and offering help, if need be. I don't think I've had an answerl.

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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