A Conversation for Lana Turner - Actress

Peer Review: A8169582 - Lana Turner

Post 1

Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups

Entry: Lana Turner - A8169582
Author: Opticalillusion- what do you think of this -->A7497651 ? - U231227

As part of the vogue project. Here is Lana Turner.


A8169582 - Lana Turner

Post 2

MiniMy

Hmmm.... just to get the ball smiley - tennisball rolling on this one.

smiley - moonan American actress who's life was --> an American actress whose life was

smiley - moonJudy as the family called her was fortunate -->Judy, as the family called her, was fortunate

smiley - moonTurners father was John Virgil -->Turner's

smiley - moonAs a child Turner enjoyed -->As a child, Turner enjoyed

smiley - moonZeppo Marx a newly operating talent agent --> Zeppo Marx, a newly operating talent agent

smiley - moonshe had to recreate them from whatever she could -- does this mean that she drew them on for the rest of her life?

smiley - moonas Cora a role she was ecstatic to play -->as Cora, a role she was ecstatic to play

smiley - moonWhich she followed up by playing the role of Lora Meredith --> She followed up the success of this role by playing Lora Meredith

Covers the main points of Lana Turner. smiley - ok

Did she only have one child?

smiley - ta

minimysmiley - zoom


A8169582 - Lana Turner

Post 3

the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish

opti

If the vouge project is meant to be a H2G2 univeristy entry, then ..


please respond to the comments made on the project when you entered to to the university. A number of comments were made including

1) A uni project can't include already edited entires

2) They can't include other resercher's entries if they haven't agreeed to it

3) You may be taking on too much

4) your project homepage does not make sence, various people's names were split up their sur and first names were linked to different pages.



If you read through the uni guidelines, the process is explained clearly and it doesn't involve PR.


If you could respond to people's questions and queires about your entries, then things will progress smoothly. Otherwise many scouts will tend to pass over your entries.


tjm (scout)


A8169582 - Lana Turner

Post 4

Smij - Formerly Jimster

Or rather, the process doesn;t involve PR until all of the entries are completely finished and have been subbed.

Sorry, Opti, but we're going to have to remove all of the entries in this project from PR until such time as they're in a position to be considered finished.


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