A Conversation for 'Bill and Ted's Excellent Adventure'- the film
'Bill and Ted's Excellent Adventure'- the film
Baffled Greg Started conversation Oct 10, 2002
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The film was pretty good - even the sequel was fairly up-to-scratch.
The entry as the makings of a good'un (well, that's what I think) - However (and there is always a however... 
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The random quotes scare me a bit - they don't seem linked in with the rest of the entry - but perhaps you could separate them by right-aligning them? - I dunno! Nice touch tho'!
Removing the first person reference (I only noticed the one at the end of the entry) would keep you within the writing style guidelines.
Also (OK OK, this is the last thing!), the summary at the end of the entry which details the lead characters could be put into a table? are there any more characters?
Could there be any more cross references to other entries?
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