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Smiffy the Lab Assistant (1+9)*5-(5+4)+1=42 Started conversation Aug 1, 2002
Entry: Finger Foods - A797691
Author: Lab Assistant - self confessed chocoholic mother of three under the age of four - U195541
OK first effort here.... haven't written anything for years so please be gentle with me 
A797691 - Finger Foods
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Aug 1, 2002
This looks like an interestng entry.
I think the title might need to be changed. I assumed it was about small snacks for cocktail parties. Perhaps you could call it something like 'Finger foods - teaching young children to eat'.
A797691 - Finger Foods
Smiffy the Lab Assistant (1+9)*5-(5+4)+1=42 Posted Aug 1, 2002
*giggles* being a full time mum of three little terrors who doesn't get out much I hadn't thought of that! Thanks... title now changed 
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Bels - an incurable optimist. A1050986 Posted Aug 1, 2002
Nice entry.
Start new paragraphs at, eg:
The age of the child
The advice given
Remember
Then transfer to Peer Review!
Bels
A797691 - Finger Foods
Smiffy the Lab Assistant (1+9)*5-(5+4)+1=42 Posted Aug 1, 2002
Thanks.... and I've made the changes you noted and it looks a hell of a lot better, thanks very muchly!
Now all I have to do is get up the courage to do the scary thing and move it over to peer review... wish me luck!!!!
Karen 
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Smiffy the Lab Assistant (1+9)*5-(5+4)+1=42 Posted Aug 19, 2002
Well thanks for the good luck wishes
Here's to someone noticing my work now LOL
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Writing Workshop: A797691 - Finger Foods
- 1: Smiffy the Lab Assistant (1+9)*5-(5+4)+1=42 (Aug 1, 2002)
- 2: Gnomon - time to move on (Aug 1, 2002)
- 3: Smiffy the Lab Assistant (1+9)*5-(5+4)+1=42 (Aug 1, 2002)
- 4: Bels - an incurable optimist. A1050986 (Aug 1, 2002)
- 5: Smiffy the Lab Assistant (1+9)*5-(5+4)+1=42 (Aug 1, 2002)
- 6: Gnomon - time to move on (Aug 2, 2002)
- 7: Smiffy the Lab Assistant (1+9)*5-(5+4)+1=42 (Aug 19, 2002)
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