h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

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I have made the following changes and corrections.

Added comma after "For those interested in classification".

More specifically the genus Rubus, includes --> More specifically, the genus Rubus includes

Initially when a berry forms the berries are small and green, as they ripen -->
Initially when a berry forms, the berries are small and green; as they ripen

provides both free food with no commitment for long-term nurture of the bush and offers the challenge of-->
both provide free food with no commitment for long-term nurture of the bush and offer the challenge of

Another aspect to decide whether to pick a particular fruit is -->
Another aspect to deciding whether to pick a particular fruit is

Bramble jelly link corrected. (was pointing to self!)

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Thank you Gnomon You are taking this curating seriously - will you have time to write entries yourself as well?

Not entirely convinced the punctuation needed amending, but it doesn't hurt to add a bit more.

You do tend to use less commas than I would, but I only changed it where I felt it really needed it.