A Conversation for War On Terror
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Lucrecia (Knight of an Unusual Amount of Healing Items, Movie Buff Extraordinaire - A809958) Started conversation Jul 25, 2002
Dear John,
Hi! I really liked your article! It summed up a lot of the facts that have been swimming around in the news lately in a very conceice way and it did so without too much warmongering and hate, which, unfortunately, (at least in my neck of the woods, a small town in Illinois) seems hard to do at the moment.
The one improvement I see is an explanation of the quotes. Many of them beg for context and explanation because they cause so many emotional responses in what seems to be a primarily info-related article. You seem to be asking for a debate on Bush's points, but you don't guide that debate-to-be in a certain direction. May I recommend you giving us your personal take on these quotes or elaborating on them a bit so that we can all use them as a starting point for some great conversations!
Once again, I really liked your article! Happy writing!
-Lucrecia
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alji's Posted Jul 26, 2002
Lucrecia, have you read the posts in the Writing Workshop about this entry?
Alji, 
of the Red Dragon (Swynwr y Ddraig Goch) (conducting a sun sign poll at A712595)(Member of The Guild of Wizards U197895 looking for wiz kids to join, though you don't have to be a wiz kid just know a bit about some subject that you think will be of interest to others or just bore the pants off them. This is an equal opportunities space open to all sexes, ages and abilities)
Good, but can be improved
Lucrecia (Knight of an Unusual Amount of Healing Items, Movie Buff Extraordinaire - A809958) Posted Jul 26, 2002
I thought I did... All I saw was the one by the author. Is there somewhere else to look?
-Lucrecia
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alji's Posted Jul 26, 2002
In a pannel on the right hand side of the entry you will see that it is in the writing workshop. Just click on this link
Alji, of the Red Dragon (Swynwr y Ddraig Goch) (conducting a sun sign poll at A712595)(Member of The Guild of Wizards U197895 looking for wiz kids to join, though you don't have to be a wiz kid just know a bit about some subject that you think will be of interest to others or just bore the pants off them. This is an equal opportunities space open to all sexes, ages and abilities)
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