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fetushero Started conversation Jun 23, 2002
Entry: Wallball - A771419
Author: fetushero - U196949
I've recently discovered the sport of wallball (I moved to San Diego, CA about five years ago from the Washington, DC area) and, realizing that there wasn't a good piece about it on h2g2, so I decided to write a piece.
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Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Posted Jul 4, 2002
Please break those big blocks of text into smaller paragraphs. If you then add a few headers and remove the first person bits, it's going to be a nice one 
Perhaps you could point out the similarities or differences to squash or peloga?
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Two Bit Trigger Pumping Moron Posted Aug 2, 2002
Excellent. It, along with it's close cousin Four Sqaure, was always a favorite when I was in elementery school. We played it in Oregon.
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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences Posted Aug 4, 2002
Apart from the 'break the test up' and 'remove the 'I's and 'we's', my only suggestion would be to mention the UK variations 'waly' and 'kerby'. Both similar games, but with less formal rules, and usually only two people.
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The GR Manoeuvre --- a posting a day keeps the reaper away Posted Aug 23, 2002
A few editorial issues, and unfortunately, the author hasn't posted anything else to this site since this thread - but with a little more detail and polishing, it may be Guide-bound in the future 
Anyone want to tie up this loose end - otherwise, it looks FM-bound for the moment...
Stay 
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WD
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