A Conversation for Rubber Bands, a Hitchhiker's 2nd Best Friend

Peer Review: A76856359 - Rubber Bands, a Hitchhiker's 2nd Best Friend

Post 1

Darren Baldwin

Entry: Rubber Bands, a Hitchhiker's 2nd Best Friend - A76856359
Author: Darren - U14679247

I think this should be in Collaborative Writing Workshop, but that wasn't an option. (?)


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Post 2

Teasswill

Hi, welcome to h2g2.
I like the idea of this entry, as well as the bag one. Just the right style for the guide, but both probably need a bit more substance. There should be an option to put your entry in the 'writing workshop' when you submit for review.

Someone more expert than me will hopefully pass by, but I think you will need to remove the entry from PR, then re-submit & choose a different option.

smiley - goodluck


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Post 3

Gnomon - time to move on

I think the style and content of this are good, but it is a little bit short.

The collaborative writing workshop was disbanded years ago. The nearest we have is the Edited Guide Writing Workshop, but unfortunately, you won't get a lot of help there.

I find if you're looking for suggestions, the best place is Askh2g2. Leave this here in Peer Review for the moment, and ask a question at <./>Askh2g2</.> looking for suggestions on using rubber bands as a hitchhiker. Then after a few days, incorporate any suggestions into this entry. Make a note of who made the suggestions, and you can add them into this as a "Credit" at the end - Additional Research by Joe (or whoever).



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Post 4

Gnomon - time to move on

There are already two good entries in which rubber bands feature extensively:

"Tensegrity" and "Elastic Band Warfare". There should be links to them from your entry. If you don't know how to do that, I can explain.


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Post 5

Malabarista - now with added pony

Hi Darren, anything happening with this? smiley - smiley


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Post 6

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned


Sadly, it appears not.


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Post 7

8584330

I disagree with the suggestion to use rubber bands in hair. The nasty little things pull hair out. Only the ones that are wrapped in string or fabric can be used in hair without pulling.


smiley - smiley
HN


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Post 8

AlexAshman


This is halfway between being a simple humorous piece and being an actual entry. If you added some more about elastic bands (I'm sure Ask h2g2 would provide you with a long list of uses for the things) this would be a useful entry.


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Post 9

Malabarista - now with added pony

You can use them to make things that go "boink", for a start smiley - winkeye


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Post 10

AlexAshman


smiley - bigeyes


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Post 11

Gnomon - time to move on

The "cigar box banjo"!


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Post 12

Malabarista - now with added pony

I'll not put this on the list quite yet; of all Darren's submissions, it has the most potential. Feel like doing something with it, Darren? smiley - smiley


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Post 13

8584330

Chain a bunch of them together and make a rubber band bungie, maybe.


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Post 14

Lanzababy - Guide Editor

Darren seems to have abandoned this Entry. I think it should revert to Entry. Any seconders?


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Post 15

bobstafford

Seconded lets hope the author returns sometime


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Post 16

Lanzababy - Guide Editor

hmmmmm - well maybe it should go to the Flea Market?

Lanzababy


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Post 17

bobstafford

That will give it a better chance than it has here the flea market it is smiley - ok


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Post 18

Fizzymouse- no place like home


I think this has potential.

If the author has abandoned it I'll lift it and try to run with it if no-one else is in the frame.smiley - ok


smiley - mouse


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Post 19

Gnomon - time to move on

Off you go, then. Just remember to include the original author as an author of your entry if you use any of his.


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Post 20

Fizzymouse- no place like home


No worries, it'll give me some relief from my studies.smiley - run



smiley - mouse


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