h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Motorcycle Touring in the South Island of New Zealand - A734492
Author: six7's BA LL Pof - U192113

Editing my own writing [a novelty] feels like I'm simply rearranging the deckchairs on the Titanic...
I'm open to suggestions
So please suggest

six7's

Ahh!

Unjustly overlooked because of similarity to other recent article!

This is good - just one typo that I could find...

"if you antipate bending something to be on the cards"
^^^^^^^^^

My only other suggestion is that perhaps you could wax a bit more lyrical about the scenery, and perhaps something about some of the things to see - it need not develop into a full blown gazeteer, perhaps just a few lines on each?

Otto
Who wants to go to NZ....

Thanks Otto, typo corrected ... Only one????

Re waxing lyrical about the scenery:
I plan to add a separate entry on *Suggested itineraries* or something similar and link to that from a suitably *enticing* sentence on *this* page, maybe using *six geographically diverse provinces* as a link <?>, maybe not

six7's
* thinking cap : ON *
* RL : busy *

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Brilliant!



six7's

Yes, it was a good entry and well deserved for recommendation.

In the words of the legendary orator that was Mr E. A. Presley...

Thank you very much

six7's

Jolly well done old bean

Don't forget to let me know when the editing is finished so I can update the club page.



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