A Conversation for Motorcycle Touring in the South Island of New Zealand

Collaborative Writing Workshop: A734492 - On Two Wheels in Godzone

Post 1

six7s

Entry: On Two Wheels in Godzone - A734492
Author: sixSevens - esrevinu lellarap a morf - U192113

Constructive criticism is welcomed, as are ideas and angles not currently addressed.
six7's smiley - winkeye


A734492 - On Two Wheels in Godzone

Post 2

John the gardener says, "Free Tibet!"

Good stuff! I think you're off to a fine start. I like the layout you've chosen.

Just a suggestion, but a sketch of one or two typical treks would really bring your Entry to life for those of us who are likely to be too old to ride by the time we have enough pennies to visit Godzone.

JTG smiley - ok


A734492 - On Two Wheels in Godzone

Post 3

six7s

Hi JTG!

I had in mind describing a couple of round trips, one that takes 2 or 3 days and one that takes about a fortnight...

Plus some memories of rallies...

and some links to sites with pics and bike shops etc

Thanks for the input, watch this space, or rather *that* space...

six7's smiley - winkeye


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Post 4

BadZen

Great entry! I've wanted to head over to NZ for ages to do a bike ride!

But don't you think people are going to get confused - after all, "Godzone" is Queensland, isn't it? smiley - laugh

smiley - cheers


A734492 - On Two Wheels in Godzone

Post 5

six7s

Valid point... thank you!

Any suggestions?

Maybe "On Two Wheels in NZ" or "Motorcyle Touring in the South Island of New Zealand"


A734492 - On Two Wheels in Godzone

Post 6

BadZen

I wasn't exactly serious, but now that I think about about it, "On Two Wheels in New Zealand" might be a good title, because of the way that people might search for the entry...?


smiley - cheers


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