A Conversation for Yate, South Gloucestershire
Peer Review: A696323 - Yate, South Gloucestershire
Researcher 189945 Started conversation Feb 15, 2002
Entry: Yate, South Gloucestershire - A696323
Author: Researcher 189945 - U189945
A description of my home town...
A696323 - Yate, South Gloucestershire
Zarquon's Singing Fish! Posted Feb 15, 2002
It's a bit sparse. How many people live there? Where abouts in South Gloucestershire is it (where is the nearest big town)?
Many people will not know what 'Barratt homes' or 'Mondeos' are. These will need explanation.
Does it have any redeeming features? - the entry has a very sour tone. Could you expand a bit on the Douglas Adams connection?
A696323 - Yate, South Gloucestershire
Zarquon's Singing Fish! Posted Feb 28, 2002
Do let us know when you've made amendments to your entry.
In its present form, it isn't likely to be recommended, but with some work ...
If you want any help, by the way, or you'd find it useful to look at entries for other places, just ask!
A696323 - Yate, South Gloucestershire
caper_plip Posted Feb 28, 2002
Hi there!
I agree with Zarquon... it is a little sparse. Maybe a bit on whether it is a place of tourism, nearby towns, anything that may make it stand out...
A nit-pick I have... remove or asterisk out the profanity in the first sentence
...
It's a start! Don't be unfazed!
Caper Plip
A696323 - Yate, South Gloucestershire
Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Posted May 1, 2002
There it is, in "reverse pole position" of Peer Review, ie: at the very bottom. Now, as this posting is made, it *was*. Unfinished by any standard, and the author doesn't appear to be around to fix up anything, as this is their single and only posting ever made.
As PR is meant to be a place for *living* threads, how's about moving this one back to where it came from?
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