h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A605477

My first article, so I'm a little nervous

I thought that any Guide to the Earth had better have a goodly number of reviews of places to eat at, and in England you can't do better than to eat at Pret, providing you are the wealthier class of hitch hiker!

Not bad article, I've never got past peer review yet, so don't worry if you don't, as it does not seem to be very logical.
I think you should mention the MacDonalds shares, as I lot of my friends have now boycotted the shop, since that.
Also, Pret use strange ingredients, lots of strong black pepper where you don't expect it, wasabi actually in the sushi, so you can't remove it.
It maybe fresh, but I found when I worked nearby, it was worth buying the fruit salad on Mondays, but not any other day of the week, as it would have that slightly fizzy texture of gone offness!

Great

Rather than writing in UPPERcase you should use italics, and the 'Me' paragraph will have to go (in the edited copy), and you should reformat some other 'I's further down into 'this researcher' but that's it.

I'll have to look for them next time in the UK.

Again, great!

Do the staff really carry out a secret vote? I'm looking for a job at the mo and Pret is on my list.

Oh and what do they now call Smoothies then?

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