A Conversation for Killyleagh, County Down, Northern Ireland

Peer Review: A5700584 - Killyleagh

Post 1

Beatrice

Entry: Killyleagh - A5700584
Author: Lucky Star. I'm a hippy.....but I gotta tattoo. - U190170

Since we're on a mission to add lots of places to the Guide...


A5700584 - Killyleagh

Post 2

Demon Drawer

You trying to make my County Down entry out of date as soon as it goes live. smiley - winkeye


A5700584 - Killyleagh

Post 3

Demon Drawer

BTW house style for title.

Killyleagh, County Cown, Northern Ireland.

smiley - smiley


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Post 4

Demon Drawer

That is Down not Cown of course


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Post 5

Beatrice

Cheers.

Hopefully your entry on Co Down will go through soon, so I can link to it. smiley - smiley


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Post 6

Stu

Excellent article!

One of my Primary School trips was to Killyleagh Sailing Centre. Ahhhh the memories.

Maybe mention the Irish name - Cill Ó Laoch?

Rev. Edward Hincks is maybe worth mentioning as a famous resident? http://www.google.co.uk/search?hl=en&safe=off&q=Edward+Hincks&btnG=Search&meta=


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Post 7

KB

Good stuff Lucky Star. Do you know any good (or any dire) pubs or resteraunts in town?


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Post 8

frenchbean

Great entry smiley - ok

It's readable and makes sense smiley - smiley

My only comments are wee bitty pedantic points smiley - evilgrin

In the 1st Geography para, you quote both miles and kms. Stick to miles and put the km equivalent in a footnote.

>>Much of the local activities...<< should read <<Many of the local activities...<<

What's the 'wrong kind of sole'?

Was Hans Sloane 113 when he died? smiley - wow

Check the footnotes. They should begin with a capital letter and end with a fullstop.

smiley - ok
Fb


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Post 9

Beatrice

You're right, dear old Hans was a mere 93 when he died smiley - winkeye

Do I really have to explain that the word "sole" means both a kind of fish and also the leather bit at the bottom of your shoe (commonly shown in cartoons being caught by exasperated fishermen)?


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Post 10

Azara

Hi, LuckyStar!

This is a great entry--it's highly readable, and gives a good feel for the twon. smiley - applause

One very small point--you say that Hans Sloane was connected to Killyleagh, but you don't say how. It would be a good idea to make it clear whether he was born there, lived there for a while, went on holidays or whatever.

smiley - cheers
Azara
smiley - rose


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Post 11

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Post 12

echomikeromeo

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Post 13

Beatrice

Oh er, blimey!

It is a rather special place, I've just been spending a long weekend there, enjoying the many facets of the Lough and the friendliness of the locals (who even chat to you as you jog, unwashed, around the harbour, bless 'em!)


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Post 14

Azara

Some belated smiley - bubbly for Lucky Star!

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Azara
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