h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Aliens in the Carolinas - A55048511
Author: imperialDragonart - U14077662

Tips for aliens who find themselves stuck in the mountains of the carolinas.

Hello and welcome to Peer Review

Now, I'm guessing that what you've written is fiction, right? In which case PR isn't really the place for it. You'll find some friendly fellow writers over at the Alternative Writing Workshop, if you want to re-post it over there. (I know all these names for different areas and processes are a bit unfamiliar at first, but bear with us!)

Good luck with your writing

I thought that it was a tongue-in-cheek guide for visitors to the Carolinas ('aliens' being from the plant beyond the place).
It's a fun item but IMO needs a little reworking.

yeah we cant trust aliens who come from other plants I think this would need a fair bit more work to be accepted but it could work here, but i'll leave help to people who are better writers than I

Anyone agree that this should go back to entry?

Yes, we did try to suggest AWW due to its humorous content, but the author remained unconvinced
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Thank you for your friendly and warm welcome to H2G2 I hope to refine my entries and someday become a valuable member here.

Hi again Dragonart


I'm so glad to see you back again, I really think you could contribute a lot here. Please keep in touch.