h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

The first that came to mind when I got the page was "It's a list."
That really not good reaction to be invoking.


I don't advise padding this entry out.
I suggest narrowing your focus and doing something interesting with the subject you looking at.

What drew me in was "gulls" catching my eye and I was curious if someone had done something interesting with the subject of herring gulls and lesser black back gulls being a ring species.

Perhaps a way you could approach is think of the QI points worthy titbits on gulls and work them into something readable about them?

Entry: The Gull Family and Other Seabirds - A54046055
Author: gandalfstwin OGGMSTKMBGSUIKWIATA - U13926421


page turner

Anything happening here, gandalfstwin? And if not, can you move it back to your space and re-submit when it's ready? (I'm trying to get an overview of just how much we still have to draw from in PR...)

I don't mean to be rude, gandalfstwin, but this entry isn't going into the Approved Guide in a hurry the way it is. It would be a lot more interesting if you'd write some colourful accounts of particular birds or bird families, rather than providing a wiki-esque list of details. Yes, you're writing for an encyclopedia of sorts, but you've got to make this stuff readable. I know you can write, so let's have something of yours we can put on the Front Page, eh?

Hi Gandalf! I think you forgot all about this. Can you reclaim it until you have time to finish it? Otherwise I could ask the Eds to switch it back to your Personal Space? It would be easier for you to do, as they are still very busy.


Lanzababy

We've removed this from Peer Review for the moment. If you rewrite it in line with the various suggestions in this conversation, you can submit it again!