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Peer Review: A5367152 - I praise of co-dependency

Post 1

mutard

Entry: I praise of co-dependency - A5367152
Author: mutard - U752441

The myth of co-dependency investigated


A5367152 - I praise of co-dependency

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the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish

hi,

should the title me In praise of .... rather than I praise of ??

tjm


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Post 3

Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

And more to the point, are you sure that Peer Review is really where you're going to want to be with this entry?

Peer Review is for entries going into the Edited Guide -- which means that they all need to be grounded in facts and reality. This entry, on the other hand, seems to be pretty much all personal opinion, personal theories, personal philosophies. While I supposed it would be theoretically possible to write an entry on the merits of codependency which met the Writing-Guidelines, I think it would end up looking quite different than this one.

That said, if the Edited Guide is still really where you want to go with this, and you're willing to make some pretty substantial changes, we'll be willing to give you plenty of suggestions. But if you'd rather keep it in the style it has now, I'd suggest perhaps submitting the entry to the Alternative Writing Workshop instead.

smiley - cheers
Mikey


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sprout

Personally, I would keep the text in the same style, and move it to the AWW, as I thought it was a very interesting piece of work. Thanks for posting it.

smiley - cheers

sprout


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Post 5

the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish

agrees, - reminds himself to stop late night scouting


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Post 6

mutard

should be IN not I........


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Post 7

mutard

I would appreciate any suggestions to improve the piece


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Post 8

the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish

with respect, this is not the place for people to help improve your article,

if you could go to the peer review forum, find your thread in the list and click remove, then re submit it to the AWW (alt writing workshop), people there will be more than welcome to help you there

cheers

tjm


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Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

back to the entry?


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Post 10

GreyDesk

Yes please.


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Post 11

the_jon_m - bluesman of the parish

defo


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