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Entry: Formula 1: World Champions - A535808
Author: Eric L. Fleming - U158159

This is part of a series on Formula One Racing. Any suggested changes will have to be made by the sub-ed.

I'm no sub-ed, but I still suggest that somebody would check spelling of Mika Hakkinen's homecountry.

As an entry it's a bit thin - it's almost entirely made up of three tables

An explanation of how the points are awarded would be a good addition I think

It's the same comment as in the other stats-only Entries. They do not stand alone. It lacks contents. And a brief intro, like "what is F1 in the first place?"

HELL

A good start, but yes, you do, I feel, need to put a bit more flesh on the bones of the table. Tables seem a bit dry on their own, so more text to explain their significance, along with dates would be a help.
Also, when you write a series of connected articles, you might want to consider posting them to the University, so check out <./>University-Recruit</.>

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You also might want to use tags instead of *'s. Formula 1 is a big topic, it needs more than just stats.

Tango

The title is a bit confusing: reading it first I thought there would be an article about the Champions, how they won, more details,...

"Any suggested changes will have to be made by the sub-ed."

I don't think Sub-eds should be expected to write entire sections in order flesh out an entry such as this and the others rescued from the Formula One uni project

You know that you can do that yourself don't you Lentilla? Just go here http://www.bbc.co.uk/dna/h2g2/classic/test535808, copy'n'paste the text into a new entry of your own, and work on it from there

Just as a note: This Entry has been salvaged from UNI. So, it's probably not going back there, is it?

HELL

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