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Peer Review: A51941153 - Validation
ViolentHill Started conversation May 27, 2009
Entry: Validation - A51941153
Author: yellowpapillon - U13878609
Hello yellowpapillon!
I am of the opinion that you chose a specific topic which is worth writing about. Your essay helps me to understand the behaviour of disoriented people better.
+ You give an exact definition of the term validation and a short but informative description of this technique at the beginning of your essay, which is very helpful for people who have never heard about validation before.
+ You used a reliable source.
- Your essay is a bit lengthy (more than 1,400 words). You might consider splitting it into smaller sub-topics (see also “Writing for the Edited Guide”).
In conclusion one can say that your essay covers all important facts, is well-written and well-researched. A great first article!
A51941153 - Validation
Not-so-bald-eagle Posted May 27, 2009
ViolentHill
You are commenting on a text which you submitted yourself.
A51941153 - Validation
Elentari Posted Jun 21, 2009
Yes, but the entry is by someone else, so it's perfectly acceptable to do so.
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Not-so-bald-eagle Posted Jun 21, 2009
Hi Elentari, Check out thread http://www.bbc.co.uk/dna/h2g2/brunel/F13618892?thread=6618490 concerning same entry
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