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Ric Started conversation Jan 22, 2001
http://www.h2g2.com/A-513172
a famous berlin underground band
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Tube - the being being back for the time being Posted Jan 23, 2001
Errr... interesting article... maybe shorten the beginning and tighten up the end a bit? 
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Jeremy (trying to find his way back to dinner) Posted Jan 24, 2001
Your link doesn't work.
It should be http://www.h2g2.com/A513172
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Jeremy (trying to find his way back to dinner) Posted Jan 24, 2001
Now that I have read your Entry thoroughly, a question comes to my mind:
Are you going to add some more information about that band (which would mean that this Entry is still worked on and should be moved to the Writing Workshop) or is this all that's worth knowing about the band (which I doubt)?
As it stands, the Entry is not ready for the Peer Review, sorry, as the content of the Entry contains hardly more information than the subject.
Jeremy FS JBB
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Global Village Idiot Posted Apr 16, 2001
I agree, though I'd be tempted to Sin-Bin it as being outrageously short.
And it doesn't even mention that they took their name from the band in a quite famous book by Douglas Adams...
GVI
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Tube - the being being back for the time being Posted Apr 16, 2001
book? What book?
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Dancer (put your advert here) Posted May 29, 2001
Is this an actual entry? I think is't more of a stickynote than an entry.
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Michael Notforyou Posted May 29, 2001
No. Just...just...no. We can recommend short entries but first:
1) Complete sentences (much unlike this one)
2) Famous songs, etc?
*Michael Notforyou*
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Michael Notforyou Posted May 29, 2001
No. Just...just...no. We can recommend short entries but first:
1) Complete sentences (much unlike this one)
2) Famous songs, etc?
*Michael Notforyou*
Official Scout, h2g2
Researcher U113408
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A-513172 - Disaster Area
- 1: Ric (Jan 22, 2001)
- 2: Tube - the being being back for the time being (Jan 23, 2001)
- 3: Jeremy (trying to find his way back to dinner) (Jan 24, 2001)
- 4: Jeremy (trying to find his way back to dinner) (Jan 24, 2001)
- 5: Global Village Idiot (Apr 16, 2001)
- 6: Tube - the being being back for the time being (Apr 16, 2001)
- 7: Dancer (put your advert here) (May 29, 2001)
- 8: Michael Notforyou (May 29, 2001)
- 9: Michael Notforyou (May 29, 2001)
- 10: h2g2 auto-messages (Apr 10, 2014)
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