h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

>>What the Queen did do for the railway was to make the Isle of Wight so popular a holiday destination, that thousands of people visited each year. Initially the crossing to the island was completed on the ferry the Gareloch, however by late in 1863, it was replaced by the paddle steamer Her Majesty. Both ships were small the largest was less than 100 ton’s as they had to work close to the shore.


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What Queen Victoria did achieve, for the railway, was to make the Isle of Wight such a popular holiday destination that thousands of people visited each year. Initially the crossing to the island was completed on the ferry the Gareloch, however by late 1863, it was replaced by the paddle steamer Her Majesty. Both ships were small - the largest of them was less than 100 tons - as they had to work close to the shore.

Thanks LB I cant fault any of that good work all adopted. Thank you...again

Gosport Road - Was demolished the site is now occupied by the White Hart public house.

>>>Was demolished and the site.....



Stokes Bay Pier - This was demolished by the army engineers when partly collapsed.

>>>by army engineers when it partly collapsed.



Gomer Halt - Demolished the site was near the junction of the B3333, Privett Road and Military Road Gosport.

>>>Demolished (the site was near....and Military Road Gosport)



Lee on the Solent - The station is located near the Lee pier head the building is now an amusement arcade.

>>Lee pier head, the building is now an ...

All done LB thank you

I can still see an extra 'the' in front of 'army engineers'

but once you take that out, I can't see anymore grammatical errors.


Don't thank me, I'm glad to help. You got me working on writing in the first place, so its my great pleasure. Good luck with this entry. I hope you get the T-shirt

Still thanks anyway

Aww, go on,

any more ideas

Anyone have anything to add

I suppose that this is about finished fat chance

Any more ideas please

A50602259 I got the original back not sure how but its back

I didn't notice it had gone - but glad its back anyway Bob

Hi LB yes its back hows things

Not bad -

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