A Conversation for MacGregor's Grill and Tap Room, Rochester, NY
Edited Guide Writing Workshop: A50685573 - MacGregor's Grill and Tap Room, Rochester, NY
Sherkaner Started conversation Apr 30, 2009
Entry: MacGregor's Grill and Tap Room, Rochester, NY - A50685573
Author: Sherkaner - U13941140
A quick article about one of my favorite local bars. Comments welcome.
A50685573 - MacGregor's Grill and Tap Room, Rochester, NY
AlexAshman Posted May 19, 2009
This looks like a good basis for a piece, though you'll need to explain phrases such as 'RIT campus' and 'U of R campus'. Also, don't bother putting exact prices as these change over time - just say whether the place is generally cheap, moderate or expensive.
With a little work, this entry could be ready for Peer Review 
Alex 
A50685573 - MacGregor's Grill and Tap Room, Rochester, NY
Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups Posted Jul 7, 2009
Hmm are you still working on this Sherkaner?
A50685573 - MacGregor's Grill and Tap Room, Rochester, NY
FordsTowel Posted Jul 12, 2009
If you should come back to this, I think it's coming along fairly well, but you may have to create some additional entries; or, at least, add footnotes for things like locations (addresses), and what a garbage plate is!.
Good luck with this! 
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