A Conversation for Santa Fe, New Mexico, USA

A506305 - Santa Fe, New Mexico, USA

Post 1

GTBacchus

http://www.h2g2.com/A506305

This is a fairly thorough and friendly article on Santa Fe, New Mexico, where I live. It is a combination encyclopedia entry/travel article, because that seemed appropriate for h2g2.

I sent it to writing workshop, and Sam suggested I might lose some of the links. What do you guys think? Which ones should go? I like them all. Also, should the outside links be in popup windows or not?

Anyway, enjoy!


A506305 - Santa Fe, New Mexico, USA

Post 2

Seven of Nine [(1x52)-2-8]x1=42!

I don't want to disagree with Sam.
But I think this entry is fantastic, for a first effort.
What does anyone else think?
smiley - bubblyGTBacchus!
This may take a while, for the article to be recommended then submitted.
I suggest you forget about this one, and start working on your next.
The time will seem to pass much quicker.smiley - biggrin
~Seven of Nine~smiley - flyhi
p.s. I have an entry awaiting comment smiley - bigeyes


A506305 - Santa Fe, New Mexico, USA

Post 3

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

A great entry, GTBsmiley - biggrin
~AGB~smiley - angel


A506305 - Santa Fe, New Mexico, USA

Post 4

Administrator-General (5+0+9)*3+0

Personally, I think the more links, the better.

Excellent entry. I particularly liked the commentary about streets. I thought it was just Massachusetts which was like that. smiley - sadface


A506305 - Santa Fe, New Mexico, USA

Post 5

Amator

Great entry! I hope it will be in the Edited Guide soon - seems like it needs no editing at all.

Amator


A506305 - Santa Fe, New Mexico, USA

Post 6

GTBacchus

I've tweaked a couple of paragraphs and added a couple of 's in the Food/Lodging section for improved readability. And, oh!, what's this? I seem to have moved this thread to the top of Peer Review! smiley - bigeyes


A506305 - Santa Fe, New Mexico, USA

Post 7

GTBacchus

Ok, Scouts and Subbies, I've been working on this. I finally read the page about how to write good guide entries, and realized I should change some stuff. I cleaned up the GuideML and audited the links. A couple of links were sketchy, so I removed or changed them, and only added one or two. Then I went over the copy with a fine toothed comb and gave it a good polish (mixed metaphor! smiley - bigeyes). Now it looks better, I think. Time for me to get working on a completely different entry!

GTB, P, KoP smiley - star


A506305 - Santa Fe, New Mexico, USA

Post 8

Zak T Duck

Hi.

Just letting you know that your article has been recommended for eventual entry into the Edited Guide. You will be contacted by email when the entry is ready to enter the Edited Guide, but please be patient though as there is a bit of a queue.

Congratulations, and keep up the good work.

Croz (Scout)


Congratulations!

Post 9

h2g2 auto-messages

Editorial Note: This thread has been moved out of the Peer Review forum because this entry has now been recommended for the Edited Guide.

If they haven't been along already, the Scout who recommended your entry will post here soon, to let you know what happens next. Meanwhile you can find out what will happen to your entry here: http://www.h2g2.com/SubEditors-Process

Congratulations!


Congratulations!

Post 10

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - bubblyGTB!


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