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Entry: Grooming: The Hows And Whys Of Equine Cleaning - A47016137
Author: Malabarista - U1528154

A collaboration of the pony kind between Robyn and me Her first Entry!

Oh, that's excellent work Malabarista. I can feel an OBE coming on...

Order of Brushed Equines?

Excellent

On first read there are tiny some points

1 Your horses gender keeps changeing throughout the text.

2 If you're planning on riding, pay particular attention to the saddle, bridle and girth areas, and the area under the bootsTo explane boots please if you'll be fitting them.

3 Gently clean off the frogFOOTNOTE>To explane the frog please as well, preferably using a hard

4 ....drying process .(Unless you're posh to >>process (Unless.... and put it here ....so!). When dry....

Well done I enjoyed reading this

Thanks for reading, Bob.

The horses change gender because there are boy and girl horsies, you know And we didn't want to say "it".

Will add a footnote about the boots, but the frog has already been explained in footnote four.

And I'll go change that last sentence - simply moved it too often. Wasn't easy melding our two versions

It is very good Mal

The horses change gender because there are boy and girl horsies, you know And we didn't want to say "it".
I think house rules may require one or the other.

Will add a footnote about the boots, but the frog has already been explained in footnote four.
Good Mal.

And I'll go change that last sentence - simply moved it too often. Wasn't easy melding our two versions.
Sorry I missed that.

Changes made

Good Entry

mini

Yay! Thanks for doing the editing as well Mal, and for making it funny and informative rather than just a sheer mass of words!

Looks like we could have a right bunch of groomers here if we're not careful...

I nicked a lot of the jokes from yours

Observe closely, then you can do the next one!

NOOOOO!!!!!

Well done, both.

This is really well-written and informative

Icy

Thank you

To celebrate, I'm watching the Hootoo TV series of an evening (I'm a TV series virgin I'm afraid. I'm muchly enjoying it!)

Thanks, Icy. I'll be going over it again later (I actually plan to put in some links...

Must get some actual RL things done now, though.

o_0

Get back here and finish it Mal! I've waited patiently for long enough!!!

So you have

You will be!

I'll be perfectly willing to put in links to any Entries you find worthy

Now don't get me wrong, I had a really good snigger about the title, but if it's a deliberate play on words and not just the product of my dark imaginings (which I'm prepared to conceed given that I did, in fact, find it funny), it is possible that it could be considered the least bit tasteless.