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Post 21

AlexAshman


Now let's be fair on the judges - I didn't quite push myself to the limit writing this, even though it's technically outside my field of expertise.


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Danny B

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aka Bel - A87832164

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Post 26

Beatrice

Oooh, well done Alex! smiley - applause


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Post 27

Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups

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Post 28

AlexAshman


smiley - cheers all smiley - smiley


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Post 29

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - applauseAlex, very well donesmiley - ok


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Post 30

AlexAshman


Thanks GB smiley - cheers


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Post 32

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

A46378245 for your approval smiley - smiley

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Post 33

AlexAshman


All fine except for those em dashes you've put in. I can't remember the rationale, but the English Usage guidelines currently state "that the en dash should be used with spaces either side – like this – and that 'em dashes' should not be used."

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Alex smiley - smiley


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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - erm I don't know why we suddenly began using mdash, there was a discussion though I don't have time to look, so I've switched back what I changed and I'll return to Eds nowsmiley - magicbutton pressed thanks Alex smiley - ok


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Post 35

AlexAshman


Ah, I remember now. I'd been informed that em dashes were used without spaces either side, and that this would upset the line breaks. I can't see any reason not to use em dashes with spaces either side, though it might upset the experts.

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