A Conversation for GG: Delphi, Greece

A449165 - Delphi, Greece

Post 21

Gnomon - time to move on

Thanks for that, Elentari. I've downloaded Herodotus from Gutenberg, and I'll be able to quote the oracle's response if I decide to include the story. But the Entry will need a little rewriting to get the story to fit, so I won't do it now. Maybe this evening.


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Post 22

Gnomon - time to move on

A449165

Thanks for spotting that typo, Rockhound.smiley - ok


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Post 23

McKay The Disorganised

The Delphic games were originally dedicated to Appollo, and as such were an artistic contest. Traditional events were added to it later, but the opening event was a hymn to Appollo. (An early version of the Eurovision ?)

Delphi at least rewards readers of the fables with something solid to see. During my recent holiday, to Gozo, I visited Calypso's cave. (Calypso supposedly rescued Odysseus when he was shipwrecked and kept him in her cave for 7 years.) To judge from the evidence Calypso was a twenty a day nymph, with scant regard for house-keeping and toiletry.

Nice entry Gnomon, and one that cries out for pictures of the actual site - its over a quater of a century since I visited, I must go back.

smiley - cider


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Post 24

Woolly Mammoth

Fantastic! Haven't got anything more to say.


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Post 25

The H2G2 Editors

How's it going there Gnomon with Delphi? We're in no rush, just checking progress smiley - biggrin


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Post 26

Gnomon - time to move on

Hi Eds. There's one small rewrite I want to add to this, to include the story about the lamb and tortoise stew. I'll try and do that today.


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Post 27

Gnomon - time to move on

I've added the story about King Croesus's stew, so I feel that this is now complete. Would anybody like to check those couple of paragraphs over? They're at the end of the section "The Oracle".


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Post 28

aka Bel - A87832164

It looks good to me smiley - ok


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Post 29

Rockhound

Only one small typo: encouragment --> encouragement

But couldn't see anything else wrong with it smiley - oksmiley - biggrin


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Post 30

Gnomon - time to move on

Thanks. I've corrected that spelling mistake, and have run the whole thing through a spelling checker, which spotted one more spelling mistake.

So I think it really is finished now.


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Post 31

Elentari

Might be worth spelling out that none of the other oracles got it right.

Also, I was wondering whether it might be worth renaming the entry slightly, since the current title implies that it's about the town. As you said, there really isn't much there apart from the site of the oracle, but all the same - I wondered about "Delphi and the Delphic Oracle, Greece".

Just a thought. smiley - 2cents

Ready to go, I think. smiley - smiley


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Post 32

aka Bel - A87832164

>> since the current title implies that it's about the town<<

Elentariy, I beg to differ. I personally associated the oracle immediately, but then maybe that's just me.
I think the title you suggested is too long and a bit clumsy, but I wouldn't know what to suggest instead.


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Post 33

Elentari

I know what you mean. It's just a suggestion, anyway. smiley - smiley


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Post 34

Woolly Mammoth

What about 'The Delphi Oracle'


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Post 35

Gnomon - time to move on

I'm happy with the title. It's not just about the Delphi Oracle, but the whole ancient site, which as I say is the biggest tourist site in Greece outside of Athens.

I've changed:

The Oracle of Delphi correctly determined this in its answer.

to:

Only the Oracle of Delphi correctly determined this in its answer.

I think this covers the point about the others getting it wrong.

smiley - smiley


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Post 36

Elentari

smiley - ok


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Post 38

aka Bel - A87832164

Congrats smiley - bubbly


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Post 39

Gnomon - time to move on

Uncrosses fingers.

Yay! smiley - bubbly

That's my 150th entry - not all of them solo, but I wrote the main part of all of them (in one it was just more than 50%).

smiley - biggrinsmiley - biggrinsmiley - biggrin


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Post 40

aka Bel - A87832164

Fantastic, Gnomon smiley - magic, and you've solved the riddle about your 'crosses fingers' tag, I was wondering smiley - biggrin


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