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Peer Review: A43230511 - Tank Tops

Post 1

Icy North

Entry: Tank Tops - A43230511
Author: Icy North - U225620

Original Entry: A994836 - Tank Tops
Original Author: U220129 - Learning to love our Randy leader
Flea Market Conversation: F74125?thread=324693
Original Peer Review Thread: F117837?thread=256378

This is a Flea Market rescue. The original author hit difficulties when PR highlighted that a tank top is something completely different in the US. I've dealt with this at the outset.

Comments and suggestions welcome smiley - smiley

smiley - cheers Icy


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Post 2

aka Bel - A87832164

This is much clearer than the original version. or it is because I read it twice now.

If I understood it correctly, a tank top is what's called a Pullunder here (a sleeveless pullover) and it isn't worn under your short, like our name for it might imply. A tank top here is a better vest, worn like a t-shirt.


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Post 3

aka Bel - A87832164

Or even under your shirt. smiley - laugh


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Post 4

aka Bel - A87832164

Tank Tops:

http://images.google.de/images?hl=de&q=tank%20top&cr=countryDE&um=1&ie=UTF-8&sa=N&tab=wi

Pullunder:

http://images.google.de/images?um=1&hl=de&cr=countryDE&q=pullunder


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Post 5

Icy North

Thanks Bel smiley - ok

That is exactly the difference between the US and UK view of what a 'tank top' is.


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aka Bel - A87832164

Yes, it just shows that the USA's influence on Germany is extreme.
It is the reason why it took me two reads to get what a tank top actually is (in the UK). smiley - biggrin


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Post 7

Icy North

I've made a couple of changes. Is that clearer? smiley - smiley


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aka Bel - A87832164

Thanks. It was clear before, I only had a very thick moment or two when reading it first. smiley - biggrin


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Post 9

BigAl Patron Saint of Left Handers Keeper of the Glowing Pickle and Monobrows

This is the Brits' concept of a tank top - and I heartily approve smiley - winkeye

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v352/morganzola/parisparisvogue.jpg


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Post 10

Icy North

If that's a tank top, then she got one end of the wool caught in a barbed wire fence 5 minutes earlier.

I'll be checking back later.


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Post 11

BigAl Patron Saint of Left Handers Keeper of the Glowing Pickle and Monobrows

"Call that a tank top. THIS is a tank top" , Post 09. smiley - winkeye


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Post 12

Cyzaki

Tank tops are quite popular amongst business women - they are worn over a shirt as a slightly less formal alternative to a suit jacket. I have a couple which I wear to work relatively often, and when I worked in the City quite a few women wore them.

smiley - panda


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lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned


BigAl, that's a crop top!


smiley - yikes


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Post 14

aka Bel - A87832164

Can we start with the corrections then?

not unlike like the ones - not unlike the ones

During their heyday the tank top was - during its heyday

enabled the sleeveless woollens to rapidly became - become


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Post 15

Icy North

smiley - birosmiley - ok


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Post 16

Malabarista - now with added pony

The UK "tank top" is what Americans would call a "sweater vest"

http://images.google.com/images?client=opera&rls=en-GB&q=sweater%20vest&sourceid=opera&ie=UTF-8&oe=utf-8&um=1&sa=N&tab=wi


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Post 17

BigAl Patron Saint of Left Handers Keeper of the Glowing Pickle and Monobrows

Yes I know smiley - sadface. But my justification for this is that when I googled 'crop tops', quite often 'tank tops' are mentioned in the same vein.


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Malabarista - now with added pony

There is no justification for Paris Hilton smiley - winkeye


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Post 19

BigAl Patron Saint of Left Handers Keeper of the Glowing Pickle and Monobrows

smiley - footprints No, probably not.


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Post 20

Icy North

Thanks all smiley - smiley

smiley - biro I've mentioned 'sweater vest' smiley - ok

smiley - cheers Icy


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