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How to plan a Wake

Post 1

Bob Gone for good read the jornal

First of all I will have to apologise for the spelling and grammer but I am dislexic and there is only so much the spell checker on word can do smiley - winkeye
I have tied my best to cover a diffacult topic and would apreceate you vews smiley - biggrin
http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A422308


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Post 2

xyroth

I wouldsuggestthat this entry splits readily into two parts, which are "how it is normally done" and "how to do it this way". It should therefore be so split, with better headings than i just used.
Apart from that, and a general polish to improve the flow of the narative, i can't think of any other improvements. Adding a preamble might help.


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Post 3

Bob Gone for good read the jornal

Thanks I will sort it out when I get back smiley - biggrin


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Martin Harper

Format Violation. Exterminate! Exterminate!

myre - showing off her Dalek disguise


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