h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Nice entry I didn't know that Mother Goose was originally written for children to play...

These are my comments on this entry as far as style is concerned, just my opinion, though
I think you could dispense with the outline of the entry- I think the headers speak for themselves. Also the beginning of the 'biography' section should be in full sentences.

I like your assesment of his style; the only thing is I think you should explain what a pedal is. ie, most people would immediately think of the pedals on a piano & I'm sure thats not the kind you mean

About the piano to orchestra thing- you may want to mention that he also did it with other people's piano pieces, like Mussorsky's pictures at an exhibition.

About the pieces- you ~have~ to mention Bolero in more detail not doing so would be unfair to the audience

I really enjoyed this one, Kes, well done

Many thanks for your comments, Joanna.
There is such value in having another pair of eyes (and another brain) check out a piece of "solo" work!
I have adopted all you suggestions, and, as a result, the article now reads much better.
If you could spare the time for one more look - just in case I've missed something - I would be for ever grateful honest!
Thank you once more.

I've reread it and really enjoyed it. I believe that it should go in the 'edited' guide...

Thank you. After the upgrade, I'll read the submission instructions for the "Brave New World" and get cracking. I wonder what to tackle next? Another day, another adventure ...

I have posted a mention of the Ravel article (A400645) on the Peer Review page (as per the new instructions. Let's see if anyone likes it!

well I'll have to go and endorse it now, won't I 'cause its cool. Hopefully this may mean that ppl get more traffic to their pages too...